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Love is...

Love is when he says I Love You,
and you feel it in your heart.

Love is when he kisses you,
and you feel it in your soul.

Love is when he misses you,
and you feel it miles away.

Love is when he makes you feel
like you are more than just another
girl in the crowd.

Love is when he chooses never to
give up on you.

Love is when he is there for
you, no matter what happens.

But most importantly,Love is
when he completes you, love is when
he makes you feel important,love is when
he makes you feel... like a somebody.

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Written April 6th, 2006

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  • Sunset Boulevard
    April 6, 2006
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    This is great! I really liked how you kept the repetitive "Love is..." throughout the whole thing. It really helped tie it together and you definitely got your point across. I think my favorite part is the last stanza, and especially the "love is when he makes you feel...like a somebody." Well done! Keep up the awesome work!

  • mysteryfriend
    April 6, 2006
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    love it

    i love this poem its really tru and i should so follow it because of da issue thingy but anywayz i love this poem alot this is ma new favorite poem cuz its cool lik dat i really do love it wow so u gonn show it to ****** i really do love it its really tru but lik mega tru
    Edited on Apr 06, 7:21 p.m. because 'misspelled'.