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Devil's Advocate

Dying in the arms of my savior.
Deception,
Key to your veiled manipulation.
My savior,
The Devil's Advocate,
The cause for this devastation.
I see the rapture in your eyes...
Cloud nines of the 7th heaven that you will never see,
Are reflected in your eyes.
You will never see the Euphoric Utopia.
Surrogation with an alternate reality,
to make mine just as disappointing as your own.
As you eradicate my life.
The instigation of my execuation,
was the aspiration to ace.
Excel in your obejective,
With only your selfish acquirements to obtain.

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Written April 6th, 2006

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