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Would

If I just walked away
Would it change how you feel?
Would it really matter anyway?
Will it help your wounds heal?

If I just said good-bye
Would that be the answer to your prayer?
Would you feel less compelled to try?
Would it fix your despair?

If I just let go
Would it show you how far we've gotten?
Would it even mean anything though?
Or have you already forgotten?

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Written April 6th, 2006

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  • ProudMomma
    June 12, 2008
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    i have felt this way many times!! great write hon keep penning!


  • DreamReader
    April 29, 2007

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    wow...lookin back on this...holy shit...I can see where he would think this was about him...and the funny thing is...I agree with you...I think he has already forgotten

  • craziness-smile
    May 14, 2006
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    fantastic...seriously..i like it a whole bunch lol..well umm..keep it up..alright? ttyl

  • kewlfred17
    May 2, 2006
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    very very good. i love the question format


  • Stonesk8r
    April 25, 2006
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    awesome


  • Purple Unicorn
    April 12, 2006
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    Full of pain, confusion and your soul as you empty the words out on this one. I enjoyed this one very much. Many people can put themselves in this one. Keep up the good work girl!!!
    Dana


  • MissinArk
    April 9, 2006
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    Hey this is good and im sure i know who its about maybe... well anyways i like it alot!!! ttyl!
    Ashley

  • ToDream1177
    April 7, 2006
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    Aww...this feels like my 'hero' is telling me this to my face and it kinda hurts but its good! Great write.
    -Britney

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