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Thoughts Haiku

If I thought you were

And it is the thought that counts

Actions were silent

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Written April 6th, 2006

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  • Hiatus
    April 30, 2007
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    This evokes a lot of emotion, you think of a fight that ends in "the silent treatment".


  • individuality gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    Think makes me think of I think therefore I am, though you turn it around into I think therefore you are. A good angle.


  • spacewench
    April 6, 2006
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    Very deep and clever.