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If only I knew

If only I knew what these feelings really meant
The way my heart flutters and then falls back down
The way I can't communicate
The way I can't say what I mean

Author notes

maybe a work in progress...maybe this is all...just ponder...my muse is on vacation
Written April 6th, 2006

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  • crosscountry07
    June 3, 2006
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    great

    awwww. i think i could know within three guesses who your muse is but maybe im wrong. well, its a really sweet poem. maybe you should show it to your muse?