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420

if your a stoner                 then you know
just what  time                 you should toke
blaze it on up        create some smoke
watch your self                 or you could chock
lets get high                     its about that time
we got the bom  weed with out the seed
i'm a stoner loner with company so i’ll roll
my blunts real tight so they smoke just right
if your down to blaze will smoke all night
            hurry up man
            spark that shit
            its just a fewb4
                                            we relay get lit
                                            pass the bong my
                                            way we don't have
                                            all day 4:19 got  a
                                            minuet  to pack the
                                            bowl to its finest  
                       
        rip it back hits                                                  
        make your eyes                
            sink just think
                  maybe not
                  hers some                
               pot for the              
            thought  or        
         not i forgot      
       420has gone    
     it never last ‘s
 not celebration but liberation
of the rights that we don't have  
               
               to enjoy
             a plant but
            i wont go on
         that rant cuz the
     nights almost over but
 i wont send you home sober
   so ill  pack a steam roller
     just come right on over
      i hope you enjoyed
         my most favorit        
          time of day if you
    did come on
             the holiday

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Written April 6th, 2006

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  • TheDrip
    April 6, 2006
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    Well with the exception of the spelling being a bit hard to follow at times, this is fuckin' awesome. (Pardon my language). Very well done, you summed up that glories date and time perfectly Thank you and good luck!