The cold water runs
from the glimmering faucet
as she stands
naked
in front of the fogged mirror.
The breeze from the bedroom
reaching her bare body.
Soothing.
She shudders slightly
as she hears a thump.
-Oh it’s nothing
just the old house.-
She reaches for the cloth,
wiping the glass clean.
Another loud thump.
She jumps.
The summer air reaching in
through the silky tulle,
billowing.
With a scream
She is pulled.
His harsh hands
grabbing.
Onto the bed
he throws his victim,
his devilish eyes almost grinning.
She pushes and hits
to no avail.
Screaming’s no good,
She’s trapped…
The deed is done.
He lies by his wife.
-Honey how was that?
Was that rough enough?-
She giggles and turns,
looks into his eyes.
Fantasies though strange,
can come alive.
Author notes
It's meant to be a shocker...so did I shock you? Or at least amuse you?
Written April 6th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Taboo/Forbiden/Unattainable by loneArt.
400 points, ended April 10, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh haha, I didn't quite expect the ending. The poem is so beautifully descriptive, I could visualize EVERYTHING perfectly. ^.^ Wonderful write, m'dear.
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Very nice piece, well written and expressed. Loved the twist of the ending and the imagry of the whole piece. great job, keep your pen forever flowing!
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excellent
Excellent words and poem ...so well expressed.Well written. -
Very nice. Nice shock effect as well. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Ooooh excellent! Rock on, my friend! Excellent!
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A FINE PIECE, INDEED! (pun intended)
A very fine piece, indeed - with a nice twist at the end! Fantasies like this can add spice to a love life that has become routine after many years of being together and exploring our fantasies and making them come alive can lead to pleasures newver experiences by both patners before! I wonder what DR. RUTH would have to say in her own unique way about this piece!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Nice imagery, I could see, feel and smell the scene. Nice trick at the conclusion. I must discuss this with my wife and see if this is something she might want or need. Thanks for the thoughts and words.
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