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Her Love~

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Her Love~

My heart has many emotions pouring
With teardrops lost in love
For the girl I'm forever adoring
I'm always dreaming of
She heals my pain with her whispers delight
Her hymns of precious rhyme
Overflow within my dreams of the night
And how I wish her mine

 I wish upon a bright, red rose of may
My eyes could lock with hers
And forget about dreadful yesterday
To live where love endures
For my soul remains empty, and lonely
But when I hear her tone
Words of the most healing kind caress me
Her dreams become my own

 We talk for hours, from miles away
She heals my deep sorrow
I embrace her love, as I humbly lay
Right beside my pillow
Let our souls explore, where our dreams belong
As we both become free
We are more than two notes in a love song
Loving me tenderly
 

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Thanks for reading me, much love, me, Timothy~~~~
Written April 5th, 2006

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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling gold member
    March 24

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    you sucker! inject some of that sensuality in my writes you grab the rose petals of love and you peel the petals one by one and you simply melt my heart beats away another hit tim i think i am definately a fan simply loved it

    Mrs. Enthralling


  • heavensdesires
    April 16, 2006
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    Mmmmmmmm poetically you place a dream for all of us
    Thank you,
    Carissa

  • victoria Secret
    April 10, 2006
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    Amazing! This was a charm piece. A one of a kind adorable piece. You're so talented. Gifted with a treasure of finding the right use of words and using it in the right sense of ways, like how you did in this piece. Good job darling. As always.

    victoria

  • poeticpieces
    April 9, 2006
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    Beautiful! Full Of the U Send~
    Edited on Apr 09, 9:48 because ''.

  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    April 6, 2006
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    OOHH this is sooo beautifully romantic!! I love all of the descriptive words you used!! Awsome job and good luck in my contest!

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    beautiful

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is just so touching and warming to ones heart. such a beautiful write. this is so full of love. i very much enjoyed your write. i must applaud this poem, for it is outstanding to me. thanks for sharing and please keep writing.

  • ChaoLuv
    April 5, 2006
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    Like everyone else I must say this is really beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. (not that you need it)
    0_XVampyX_0


  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    April 5, 2006
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    superb

    now can you tell me what i need to do to get a certain unnamed someone to feel this way about me? my attitude so far has been, he will either love me or he won't. maybe the wrong attitude but i refuse to play the dating game and lover myself to silly and useless guiles to lure anyone. i am me and that is how it is. i would just pass out if anyone ever wrote this way for me. but i can dream can't i? love you timothy. your sis viyanna

  • mzladyt
    April 5, 2006
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    This is absolutely beautiful. The words flow and the rhyme is so easy to read and follow. Great job

  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    INCREDIBLE!!!!

    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!! Again my dear you stole my breathe away. To feel so much love, my goodness. LOL Anyway once again you win my applause. God Bless you my friend. I would love to find a friend so true like you. You are one in a m illion. Peace be with you.
    Awesome write and so well written....
    God Bless
    Victoria
  • crjem1991
    April 5, 2006
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    thumbs up

    Beautifully expressed emotion. Your words were fluent and an unwaivering thoght pattern, fluent and lovely
    Be Blessed, Crjem1991
  • jacksm
    April 5, 2006
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    This is just so beautiful !!!!! If I knew how to do a crying face, I would put a gazillion of them right here. I love the poem, but if you could do this for a happy poem, you should get TRIPLE gold in that contest. You should also get triple gold in the contest for this poem, it's wonderful.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    Thanks!

    I'm so glad you liked it, I love ya hun, peace, Timothy~

  • Whispering Winds
    April 5, 2006
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    OH hun,

    This is one of the most beautiful poems that I have ever read. You have me in tears right about now. Any woman could love you and i can see how. Your as precious as the deep blue sky, and more special then an Angel walking by. I love you my wonderful friend. This was very precious.

    Much love always,
    tammy

  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    Thanks!

    Thanks sweet soul, I appreciate you always uplifting me, much love, always, your bro, Timothy

  • Heavenly Angel
    April 5, 2006
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    My sweet brother, this is just soooooo beautiful! Any woman would be honored and thrilled to know you felt this way for her! Wow! I wish you the best of luck in the contest, hon! Many hugs and much love,
    Sandy
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