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Afterglow (Heavenly Angel)

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Spread your angelic
wings, come fly with me and
together we shall journey. Walking side
by side on a path through life's tragedies leading to
a brighter tomorrow. A place where the moon will forever
cast her everlasting illuminations upon your frail wings. Where
you will see the true beauty that blossoms all around you. A place
where pure love shall blankets your flesh when you are cold. A
dreamland brought to life just for you. One in which you may
live in harmony with all around you. Where the visions of
your mind with flourish, becoming your new reality. For
the moon's glow can breath life into such things never
thought possible if you believe. The beams cast
shall nourish and highlight all the truth to light
your way through roughest of storms and
the darkest of nights. Spread your
angelic wings, spread them
wide and fly with me
in the ever loving
beauty of the
moon's

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Author notes

I don't know why Sis but when I saw the contest this was the very first thing that came to mind. It's the first piece I have been able to write without second guess what was being said or written. I hope you like it.
Written April 5th, 2006

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  • Shakes-spear
    April 9, 2006
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    This was very nice and I liked it. Angel of wolves has always been a friend to me and I hope she finds peace! the Shaker

  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    Beautiful sweet soul, she so deserves your love, and I admire you for giving it through your poetic heart!

    Congrates on the gold, love ya hun.

    -Timothy
  • bookworm987
    April 6, 2006
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    wow, this is an AMAZING poem. I loved how you opened it, and closed it. This poem made me feel like I was in that place which you are writing about. Great job, and congratulations in the contest.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    My Dear wolf you are surely winning a place in my heart with your sweet and kind words.........and me having a soft for wolves helps that along as well......lol

    I must surely take some time and indulge myself with your work.
    I'm truly pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you much!

    Many blessings to you my dear Wolf

  • Celticmoon gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    Gets,

    I thank you kindly for all you have done for me recently. You have a very big heart and a most wonderful soul. Many blessings to you my dear friend

  • Celticmoon gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    My Dear Kain,

    I thank you from the bottom of my heart and soul.
    You are such a sweet dear man and I love you to death.
    I'm pleased you enjoyed this piece

  • Celticmoon gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    Thank you very much AngelEyes711
    I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
    It's my first in a while and rather proud of it myself

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    April 6, 2006
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    Beautifully Penned!

    Dearest Celticmoon,
    The sheer beauty and form of this poem is Amazing.
    I can feel your love and caring as the power of the sun.
    Utterly Beautiful in every way, Congratulations on the trophy the entire poem radiates as a diamond. Your words
    deeply comfort and nourish the body, mind and soul.
    Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally~

  • Blazing White Wolf
    April 6, 2006
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    trhis is such a lovely write written for lovely lady. The flow sentiment, imagary all are outstanding and shape is creat8ivity well done no wonder you won this contest
    love and light
    blaze

  • getsbetter gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    You did a great job on this poem Celtic. I hope your block goes by-by and looks like it did. Beautiful write lil lady...GETS
  • crjem1991
    April 5, 2006
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    thumbs up

    How very lovely, the imagery was phenominal Structure was a beauty to see. When you wrote "blankets" I think you meant "blanket" just a thought. It took nothing away from this exquisite piece.......Be Blessed, Crjem1991

  • shadowlyn infinitas
    April 5, 2006
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    impressive

    spectacular, i love the imagery and the layout. "inspirational" is what comes to mind as reading it made this bright light grow in my mind's eye. very nicely written, best of luck in this contest! keep writing such great stuff, and best wishes to you!
    ~love-music-darkness

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    this is one outstanding poem, truly amazing. wow i don't really know what else to say. i just simply love this write. it is so heartfelt touching and warm, so loving. just down right good. excellent. please keep up the good work.

  • tearsofsilence
    April 5, 2006
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    Very interesting. I love the whole form of the poem. The whole layout was fantastic and the poem itself was inspirational. keep up the great work and good luck in the contest. Kahy

  • Magickal Moon
    April 5, 2006
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    Nice

    Very, very good writing. The layout of the poem is fantastic. Let us all find inspiration in the moon's afterglow.

  • naked roots
    April 5, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful poem to Angel of wolves... Wonderful write!! I especially love this line:
    "A place where pure love shall blankets your flesh when you are cold. "
    So sweet and soothing...

  • Kain
    April 5, 2006
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    Fantastic. My dear lunar lady of the Celtic persuasion, you surpass yourself. A beauteous gem places herself in the words for all to see, and admire. I see, and I most certainly admire.

    A friend in need always inspires greatness,
    Kain

  • ghostwriter28
    April 5, 2006
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    great poem great description with your words
  • SoulWhispher
    April 5, 2006
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    great

    This is a great write, I like the picture and the style, also the way your displayed the poem, well awesome is that too much. anyway it is so full feelings and words from the heart, great work.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    Stay within the light of the moon Sis and I promise you you will NEVER walk alone hugs

  • Heavenly Angel
    April 5, 2006
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    My sweet and wonderful sister, I don't like it; I love it! This means more to me than I can put into words Thank you so much for this....it touched my heart
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