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love poem

Perfect world
Reflected light
She's my world
She's my life
Eye's of sparkle
Glistening sun
Rays of moon
She's the one
Perfect world
I'd die for you
When I say I love you
That holds true
The day I asked you
And tomorrow I grow with you

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Written April 5th, 2006

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  • Flowergirl
    September 26, 2006
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    she is your life i miss u and jenny nice poem and keep it up. well i havent wrote any poems lattly so by ove u.


  • Flowergirl
    April 14, 2006
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    this is a sweet poem and it is short...so much meening with so little words....keep it up...


  • Bland Butterfly
    April 6, 2006
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    This is short yet sweet and gets to the point. I really like how great it rhymes and the words in it. Great Job.
    *Brooke*