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Confirmation

*Creation of our souls,*

*Onward bound through the universe,*

*Fighting for the greater cause,*

*In flight of our spirits,*

*Reaching for our final destination,*

*Making room for loves desire,*

*Allowing in dreams fantasies,*

*Treasure this moment in time,*

*In the same direction of our hearts,*

*Out with the old, in with the new,*

*Netscape this faith and make it true.

Yvonne J. Griffin
4/5/06*

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Written April 5th, 2006

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  • d a f f o d i l
    April 11, 2006
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    Oh Yvonne..this was so beautiful...the warmth and sincerity that ran through this comforted me "fighting for the greater cause" such a truthful line...something we shouls trive to do! i loved this!

    Fern


  • angelica silver member
    April 6, 2006
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    Dear Yvonne,
    Just keep believing my friend, join each other in flight and soar through the universe. Never give up dreaming.
    Hugs oan

  • pozo
    April 6, 2006
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    Great acrostic Keep writing I liked the spiritual tone of this poem Good use of alliteration I liked the hope in this Good flow
    All the best
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • Roseleaf
    April 6, 2006
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    true love is in this delightful poem treasure each momenmt is very important lets hope yours will gleam with your friend so you can treasure each moment with him


    ~~Pauline