I cling
to your words
that are unspoken.
For they speak of an
unconditional
love.
Yvonne J. Griffin
4/5/06
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Written April 5th, 2006
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its beautiful, truly gorgeous. i think many people would take a lot from that.
thanks for entering, good luck
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I have always believed that words can belie intent, but true feelings can show in the actions of a person. Just a few days ago, I met this person (because that is, in my mind, all he is worthy of being called, a person) who suddenly declared himself my "man". So, since I find no attraction, no chemistry and not too much else of an incentive to be with him, I am putting him through a test, doing all that I can to get him away from me. I can't shake him, I suppose because he is hell bent on me being his (but, since he deathly annoys me, it won't happen if I can help it.) Some of the things he is doing...and also what I'm hearing...shows the pressure to be in a relationship. I am not ready and wouldn't want one with him anyway; however, I think some things are subconsciously done and we may be unaware of him. (So sorry for ranting on your page!) I think we are all better for reading between the lines. This is absolutely beautiful, one of the best poems I think I've ever seen of yours. Hopefully, I will perfect the art of listening with my heart.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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sometimes actions speak louder than words and...love even louder. Keep up the great work and thanks for your kind comments on my latest work.
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