Can you find me
I’m out here alone
Standing on the edge
Don’t know which way is home
If I jump you wont find me
I’ll be gone forever
My life will be over
Could things get any better
I’m out here alone
Don’t know which way to go
I need your arms around me
Show me which way is home
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Lost feelings
Written February 19th, 2003
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so depressing,and that feeling you feel is in control,its got control of me as well,if i could i'd be right next to you not knowing where to go
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very sweet, very good way to pack a lot of meaning into a few words... i wish i was blessed with the last line of your poem when i am depressed... i like your poems a lot, thank you, don't stop writing... suffocating hugz n bloody bitez, krys
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wow, i really liked this one too...your poetry is really good, but i'm sure u hear that all the time....i can relate to alot of your sad/depressed/angst poetry. well, keep up the good writes. check out some of my stuff sometime. peace
**hannah -
Excellent poem. The words are great and you did a wonderful job.
Thank you for your comments on my poem, A NIGHT OF DESIRE's DREAM.
I more than likely drawn it more but I decided to end the dream.
Thank you again. Take care, Rick -
More than a wonderful words.
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great
Beautiful. the last stanza was perfect. I think we all feel lost at times.. And we definetly need to know our way home...
Thanks for sharing
kelli
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