You're the only one I really
ever loved
never have I wanted
someone to love me back so much
mother fucker
why do I even try
to satisfy you anymore
knowing my best will
still fall short
failing you all
over again
shooting a bullet through
the wall hitting you
on the other side
kisses are no more
can't you see were dying inside
killing each other slowly
why can't we just let go
keep on nagging me
until I bleed for you
a symbol of my love
rose petals falling
off the stem
drying up on my floor
stepping on them and
crushing them into a dust
blowing away in the wind
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if you can think of a good title for this write can you give me some sugesstions...thanks
Written April 5th, 2006
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Ok Rach I am pretty sure who this is for. Breaking away completely is never easy or as surgical as we may wish. That's not always a bad thing. sometimes we learn one is not complete without the other.
As to your poem; I am struck, happily not in the literal sense, at the image of shooting through a wall and hitting the one you love. So near we sometimes are to someone but for that goddamned wall.
This is a unique way of showing that although the physical may be met there are emotional and perhaps social requirements that must be satisfied as well. I know who you have loved and hope that love is returned in the way you wish it to be.
If the petals are dust as you state Rachel, move on and find someone who will love you in return. That is what every person deserves.
If this is not personal, forgive me please for wanting my friend to be happy. I hope you are.
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it* sorry hehe
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awesomely outstanding
omgh i really enjoyed this poem!!! wow...it sounds like i should be the lyrics to a song!!! wow great job i really like this one hehe^ ^
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