You download my dread
I'm not talking about the internet
You wish it away with just one kiss
I hope you'll never disconnect my bliss
I would really miss the time when you were gone
It would be like a never ending sad song
I type invisible numbers on your back
When I do that it the time seems to expand
I tease you on your tender spot
I know that it makes you hot
Please, stay alive and don't crash
If you die you put me in the trash
I know sometimes it's time to reboot
But we will find our way back to the root
You erase my pain and replace it with desire
I hope my account on you will never expire
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Written April 5th, 2006
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This is good. It reminded me of a piece I did a while back. "A Connection Failure Has Occured" I think was the title... It's nicely written with all of the computer talk. Hail computers.... can't live without them.
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When I do that it the time seems to expand- That line needs to get fixed, but over all it was an entertaining poem. Very modern wiht the imagery.
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i hope so xDDDDDDDDD ^^ everyone who has a pc should understand this so its not that geekish xD
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well written for a computer geek lol just kiddin
good job -
thanks a lot for your comment!
check out my other poems if you like! have a good day
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interesting, creative write in a cyberville land of life. enjoyed reading this tonight
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hilariously fantastic
that was hilarious, i loved the way you turned all these terms that usually apply to computer use to a very romantic poem with obvious deep emotion behind it. i love these lines the most: "You wish it away with just one kiss
I hope you'll never disconnect my bliss" they're great! they don't sound forced and seem to ring true. thanks for sharing this nice piece and best of luck with your future writings!
~love-music-darkness
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