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Freedom

its driving her crazy,
these wild feelings running through her,
all she wants to do is scream,
all she wants to have is freedom,
freedom from all her anger,
and she tries to act so happy,
but she don't want all this anger,
this anger that builds inside her,
she wants to fly far away,
away from all the bad memories,
away from all the torture,
she doesn't let her anger out,
she hides from everyone,
she hides behind her emotion,
she doesn't care about anything,
sometimes all she wants is to die,
all the pain inside her heart,
killing her little by little,
she has stopped all her eating,
she hardly does anything,
on the day she didn't wake,
nobody noticed her weight loss,
until the day she didn't wake up,
she finally had her freedom.

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Written April 5th, 2006

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  • djmadturk
    May 4, 2006
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    hi , I have to say that this poem is rather sad , impresssive . and I can understand ,feel the message that this poem conveys . a girl seeking her freedom from all her anger after all bad memories and torture dies unbeknown to anyone . good story ,nicely done .


  • XCaramelxSweetieX69
    April 12, 2006
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    awwww this is so sad. I love it though. Another poem I can relate to. You did an awesome job on this. Keep it up, Jessica.