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Grape

You are so sweet yet so sour
My mouth likes the touch of your tender skin
Your juice runs down my chin
I feel your pulp makes a tour
I lick you up and throw the rest in the bin
Oh, grape you are so irresistible
I have to admit I adore your sexy shape
Your taste is incredible
I eat you and record it on a tape

Author notes

i got the video on tape xD

rapidshare.de/files/17143503/traube.avi.html

video can be dl there
Written April 5th, 2006

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  • freespirit51
    January 23, 2007

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    Very interesting piece I must say. Your imagination has really worked overtime on this one. I never gave a rape much thought but I will never look a t a grape the same way again.


  • issue
    April 27, 2006
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    thanks a lot.


  • xxunloved07xx
    April 26, 2006
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    THis was a great poem and i really enjoyed reading this you did a great job on this and i loved it keep up the great job and thanks for sharing


  • Porcelain Shark
    April 5, 2006
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    Hmmmmmm.... playful write.

  • issue
    April 5, 2006
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    thx, tryed to something different its art man =)


  • Stardust100
    April 5, 2006
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    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooK this is weird brilliant but weird you have done a wicked job of this it also has a naughty side to it brilliant xxx

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