verse:
Your lies/ deceits
they've been/ killing me
I've known/ I've seen
You've no mercy/ for this freak
I feel blood/ ripping my veins
its driving me/ slowly insane
what do you/ expect me to say
I want you to/ FUCKING GO AWAY
chorus:
You don't know/ what it's like to
get ripped down/ from the start
You don't know/ what it's like
to SEE/ ...
You don't know/ what it's like to
get beat down/ and torn apart
You don't know/ what it's like
to BE/ ... me
verse:
My heart/ hacked out
it burns/ and I shout
screams fade/ die out
no one cares/ to come help
somebody please/ try to save me
free me from/ this damn disease
give me some/ reason to believe
oh god just/ PLEASE
chorus:
You don't know/ what it's like to
get ripped down/ from the start
You don't know/ what it's like
to SEE/ ...
You don't know/ what it's like to
get beat down/ and torn apart
You don't know/ what it's like
to BE/ ... me
Verse:
Muscles/ constrict
you will nev/er forget
your throat/ my grip
you shall feel/ my regrets
I had believed/ in what you said
but you left me/ alone and for dead
now should you/ live or instead
I leave you here/ BLEEDING RED
chorus:
You don't know/ what it's like to
get ripped down/ from the start
You don't know/ what it's like
to SEE/ ...
You don't know/ what it's like to
get beat down/ and torn apart
You don't know/ what it's like
to BE/ ... me
next:
I rip you/ DOWN...
and then I start/ ...
to beat you/ DOWN...
then I/ tear you
apart.. ripped/ DOWN...
and then it starts/ ...
I beat you/ DOWN...
then I/ tear you
APART!!
APART!!
APART!!
feel it/ taste it
know it's/ just the
START!!
chorus:
You don't know/ what it's like to
get ripped down/ from the start
You don't know/ what it's like
to SEE/ ...
You don't know/ what it's like to
get beat down/ and torn apart
You don't know/ what it's like
to BE/ ...
You now know/ what it's like to
get ripped down/ from the start
You now know/ what it's like
to SEE/ ...
You now know/ what it's like
to get beat down/ and torn apart
You now know/ what it's like
to BE/ ... me
Author notes
Comment on areas to improve the fluidity and maybe the word choice as well. Thanks...
Written April 4th, 2006
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wow i like it!
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Haha, the poem *Break Up* was not meant for Jenn. It wasn't meant for anybody, just felt like writing a song. But yeah, we did break up. Not by either of our choices, but instead because of her father. He told her that she can't see me because "I might rape her." So... yeah. We'll maybe go out when she moves out her of parents house, but until then...
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Wait.... Your Jenn's ex.... gosh i'm confused....why? oh well mabe it was ment to be this way... I dono...
~Alaina~ -
wow...im gonna take a shot in the dark and guess that this is a song!!! *gasp* well to tell you right now that it is a kickass song and i believe in my opinion there is nothing wrong with the lyrics or flow of it.kickass!!!
~shilo -
wow this is great. so full of emotion and anger. Awesome dude. I feel this way right now, and I couldn't have described my feelings better. It's almost as if you wrote this for me lol. Great job. Keep it up, Jess.
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strong write..v. agressive i liked it
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Brilliant piece! This is very well done, fantastic! I love this, excellent, superb write!
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Wow......OMG.......Wow!!!! I absolutly LOVE this!!!! Brings a certian someone to mind as I'm reading. Very incredible write!!!!
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Hell yesss!!!!
i totally and honestly loved that!!!! i instantly thought of someone when i was reading it...it was honest and exactly what so many ppl need to hear and also what so many of us wish to actually say! great write!!!
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