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After Only A Day

Laying in my lap you comfort me
Shelter me from life
You make me poetic.
Make me smile from the inside.
"And it's almost like a corny movie scene"
You make me want to love you.
After only a day. How strange.

Laying beside me you soothe me.
Bring me to peace with your soft touch and warm arms.
You've changed me in a week.
A week of living in the love of you and I'm different.
Altered by the love and devotion you exude.


Kissing my gently you amaze me.
Show me a me I want to be.
A "you" I want to see.
A "we" that almost could be.

Standing in front of me, you see me.
And I see:
The most considerate soul.
The most touching
The most beautiful man I have ever seen.
Loving devotion emotes from every pore.
In you I feel loved.
After only a day.
How strange.

Author notes

It is raw, haven't really re-worked it. Lemme know any errors and/or changes that need to be made.
Written April 5th, 2006

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