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Opposites

The moon dreams of the sun,
The sun dreams of the moon,
Day dreams of night,
Night dreams of Day,
Night wonders what life would be like with sunlight,
Day wonders what life would look like in the moonlight.

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Written April 4th, 2006

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  • angel305
    April 6, 2006
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    that is a dirty lie!!!!!!heheheeheheheh

  • mysteryfriend
    April 6, 2006
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    getto

    i lik dat it is very tru opposites always attract wow i really do like ur poems and dats not a dirty lie so ha i laugh at u hahahahaha ok well im done laughing at u hehehe (not a laugh) so well tlk 2 u l8er in like 5 min. lol


  • Sunset Boulevard
    April 4, 2006
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    Great job! Short and to the point, for sure. Opposites seem to attract, don't they? Anyway, I really liked how you used features of nature to describe opposites. It's something that we encounter every day, but don't often think about. Good use of punctuation too. Well done!