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Body & Soul

The connection between our bodies,
is like the colors in the sunrise.

Our kiss is so magical, it is like
the rainbow after a great rain fall.

Each bead of sweat that transfers from
you to me, is like the rain falling into
the great blue sea.

The taste of your sweet lips, is like
sucking on a succulent strawberry.

The connection between our bodies is
more sensual than physical.

We Have Become One....

Body & Soul.


Yvonne J. Griffin
02/18/03

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Written February 19th, 2003

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  • Miykie
    April 23, 2003
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    Now I neeeeeed some strawberry cheesecake in my life...oh yeah! one is not a lonely number...Keep kickin' butt! let it flow let it flow let it flow...


  • Rubee
    February 27, 2003
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    a beautiful and oh so tender write...true passion is definitely so much more than just physical...wonderfully written!!!


  • Kalexi
    February 19, 2003
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    Yvonne, this is sooooooooooooooo beautiful I love this

    Precious write, you described amazing feelings of love so beautifully


    Karen


  • Krispi
    February 19, 2003
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    Wow my mouth just got like that lil tinge it gets when u imaging something really sweet....That was great! aww it was so sweet and just wonderful!! i really liked it!!! Its amazing that any poem you read about love, if your IN LOVE or HAVE BEEN in love, you can relate to it..Love is such a marvelous thing, dont you agree? But I guess it can be one of the most painful things as well..Anyways..Wonderful write, I really enjoyed reading it!!
    Best of everything to you!!

    ~Kristi~