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Non-sense Poem

Baby I love you
Yeah we just met
Yesterday in mall
But I know that it is love

So why did you betray me
I mean, sure we shouldn't really talked
But even you can't deny
The chemistry that occurred with our eye contact

How can you be with her
You know you should be with me
Even though you only saw the back of my head
That should of been enough to know I was the one

Others say you're a passionate guy
Well that passion should belong to see
Who cares that you two have been together for four years
And I'm just another cashier

But if you are already in love
With your current girlfriend
And since you don't even know me
I must ask you one question........







THEN WHY IN THE HELL AM I WRITING THIS SHIT!

Author notes

I'm sorry but I just had to write this for some reason. I have read many poems that made no sense to me. So I decided to write one myself and ask the question I want to ask the writer.
I will probably delete this but it was fun writing though. Stuff like this is funny to me (which is why I put it under humor). If you all give me some positive feedback than I might choose not to delete it. Thanks for reading!
Written April 4th, 2006

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  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    April 4, 2006
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    Thanks for your vote baby!


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 4, 2006
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    I like it! Sometimes love doesn't make sense and I think by now you know it. Love can be crazy, uplifting, powerful, but it can also be depressing, confusing and relentless. That's why true love does hurt. I vote keep it!

    Ted E

  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    April 4, 2006
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    Don't feel bad. We haven't been commenting each other lately. But I hate poems like the beginning of this one. Nothing against the writer, it just isn't me you know. Yet you do have a point. It never hurts to dream....but it never hurts to wake up either.
    Thanks for the comment cuz!


  • KrazyKazi
    April 4, 2006
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    lovely jay! hey cuz! sry i haven't commented you lately (slap myself) anywho, i like this powm and i know what you mean. but it is nice to dream about the boy you can't get, you know? hope that there is the tiniest bt of chance that person will notice you and maybe like you.
    kick ass poem though... had me going to being all cute with the sort of spying at the dream boy from a hideout, hehe. then in the end... BAM!
    good write!