Two hearts
residing in different worlds
yearn to be together
But time and space keep them apart
Lack of knowledge constraints them even more
Yet they know their love is real
It grows stronger as the time passes
Feeling each other in the depths of their souls
Yearning to break free from the forces that bind them
To catch that radiant beam of light would be beautiful
For it is only in doing so
that two hearts
may become one
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Written April 4th, 2006
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wise words and a lovely poem,
love the last lines
For it is only in doing so
that two hearts
may become one
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Lovely poem
Your words are so lovely. The imagery in this poem is beautiful. A great romantic write you have penned. A pleasure to read. You take care, Sandy
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4 stars * * * *
Oh this love poem really surprised me. The pure words come together to express the holy feeling of the poet. To me word by word were great but “Yearning to break free from the forces that bind them” attracted my attention even more. I’m rereading the last line: “That two hearts/may become one” since the feeling is briefed in just one sentence.
Now this is my idea about love: The equation of love is not applicable to any fixed rules of the world. It kneels down the logic, break the lines and captivates hearts!
Thanks for sharing this with us
~Massy~
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EXCELLENT!
so beautiful and really lovely to read
the description in this was fantastic too!
take care
xxx
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I admire the simplicity... Som much meaning in not much lines... not like me, when i write , i write pages and can't stop!
thanks for commenting on my poem, I'll be checking out some of yours.. but this particular poem is breathtaking, especially since i love "love poems"...
peace -
I think this kind of heartbreaking love is only second to unrequited...the fact that you are loved back by the one you love and can't even see them is an extremely sad prospect. I love the description of this, catching the radiant beams of light etc. The only thing I'm not sure on is the fact it's centred, but then that's just my personal opinion in poetry, and it doesn't really detract from the piece so I'll shut up now.
Bella -
Thank-you very much for your comments on poem! I really appreciate them!
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this poem reminds me so much of Romeo and Juilet- two lovers that could never be except for in the depths of secrecy. I really like this poem. It is something that I would write if Ryan left to go to college sooner than I thought. I'm gald that you're sharing your work on allpoetry.
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so sweet
aw this is so sweet. such a sad, but lovely story. haha i cant even describe it. good job :]
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