In deep oceans of words one swift organism describes my life.
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Written April 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- One Line! by FlameGemini.
300 points, ended April 5, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sorry, my diabetic eyesight failed me here.
Terry -
what a great one-liner! I wish I had written it. I love the layered meaning, the insight to you, and the wisdom of one who knows how important an orgasm is
~travis
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Guess it could read well both ways, Honey Bear!
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Seems to be a seamless weakness calling wisdom during calm times...glad you are no stranger to it. Most only pray when the debris is hitting the fan. Life is too open to close in eighty years. One fine day, I'll see you there in Poetry Hall, writing people's poetic names in the Book of Life.
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How vast and expansive is the depths...beware of things lurking in the murky dark waters! Great write! Best of luck to you in the contest.
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very good
he he he so sorry but i could have sworn you said argasm.
good luck in the contest. -
beware the cetacean calling you his meal
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