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Breathing Room

I fear the monsters in the sand
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Poetry makes me sad sometimes
Violence always brings good chimes

Simple words aren't the key to not succeeding in gorilla training
The old man brought me a frosty beverage and gave me a caning
My domain is exploding in a fiery ball of plaster
Ned once told me I'd be nothing but a disaster

It takes more than a zucchini to be large
Unless you're looking for a massive discharge
Squirrels are the essence of cool
Except when they ride scooters...That's just like a mule

qwerty is fun like donkey butter
But when the leprechaun eats it, he'll be thrown into the gutter
Skittles make my heart escape the wrath of Hitler
So I have to pretty my face with glitter

Llamas like to be enticed by rabid burritos
They always die when bitten by mosquitoes
The grass slowly floats beyond the window
And the ceiling tiles will never forget the night the pacaderms bit jingo

Author notes

Yeah, I'm not finished, I'm just too lazy to write this down, so dont comment on it yet.
Written April 4th, 2006

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  • Naoki Keisuke
    May 4, 2006
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    Heh, This is just what happens when I get bored...you dont even want to know what it's like when I'm high on chocolate O.o


  • Twist of Faith
    May 1, 2006
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    How did I miss this? 0_o I have to say you are one of the most...um...unique writers I've come across, hon. *feels your forehead* Is this what happens on chocolate overload? Kind of like Alice in Wonderland...on acid.


  • Dying Divinity
    April 20, 2006
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    The master of randomness, I appauld you, lol I remember you working on this in Speech, it was amusing watching you write down the most stupid thing you could think of XD nice work. By the way, how's spring break going for you?

  • googooeyeddoll
    April 6, 2006
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    wow. i have no idea what i just read but i loved it! It made no sense and neither do i so it all works like that! It was very fun to read, though. Nice write!


  • Naoki Keisuke
    April 6, 2006
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    Well put Will, well put.

  • WTFDeadMan
    April 5, 2006
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    Zebra.

    ashtray sodapop dingo? for spacious fueds of pants in the larva. Keep eating the speed of a million ants with no tentacles. I hear its awesome when the famous purple stuffed rabit, in flap jaw space, with the tuning fork does a raw blink on hara kiri rock. I need Scissors. 61!


  • FyreMyst
    April 4, 2006
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    Errrmmm,.. I agree with the others. Non-sensical but whimsical. So you. ^.^


  • Switchblade Saint
    April 4, 2006
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    erm....this was very strange...and i agree with the Frodofan....this made no sense at all....but then again, you dont always make sense.....so i guess it all works out in the end......


  • Frodofan silver member
    April 4, 2006
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    Rightly categorized is all I can say. This is absolutely bizarre and made no sense whatsoever. :-P

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