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Sleep my Princess

I feel you everywhere
Your at the end of my finger tips
You are so soft
I kiss the tiny hairs on the back of your neck
You smell of ivory
I run my hand down your arm
Being careful not to wake you
Your so beautiful
Its a treat for my eyes
Watching you sleep
Makes a tear run down my face
If anything ever happened to you
I could learn to live again
But I could never learn to love again
Sleep my princess
Both of our lives are in you

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Written April 4th, 2006

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  • XxMissundastoodxX
    September 6, 2006
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    This was so precious...I too interpreted it as your princess carrying your child...
    Thanks for sharing this heartfelt write
    Mareta


  • Abscessed
    April 11, 2006
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    Is your princess carrying your baby? Because that was my interpretation of the last line Both of our lives are in you
    Very beautiful and gentle write...your talent definetly shines through

    I would also like to take this opportunity to welcome you to All Poetry and I hope that you continue writing and exploring your style of poetry

    stolen1985


  • Closet Poet
    April 4, 2006
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    beautiful. so much love expressed, i really loved it. as panther32 said, great imagery, i admire that. well done, welcome to ap. from closet


  • Errant Panther gold member
    April 4, 2006
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    Brilliant, more please

    Excellent writing. I was captivated by the bond of love that flows freely throghout this piece. I can relate to this as I feel the same way when my partner is sleeping. Universal appeal and wonderful imagery.