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Dream Beach

We were walking, hand in hand of course
on the strip, near the beach
You in your red polka dotted dress, pearls
and ruby lips.
You looking beautiful
and me, basking in your beauty.
We walked the strip, stopping to eat
at the local cafe
Stopping other times to see the trinkets
and gifts the vender's were selling.
We laughed and we talked,
we sang.
The sun was a brilliant ball of fire
on the horizon.
We veered off course a little bit
and slipped off our shoes to feel
the soft sand, beneath our feet.
You squeezed my hand as we
got closer to the spot, near the rocks.
You broke out into a run
leaving me to follow your footsteps
You took a white blanket out of your bag
and layed it on the sand,
Then you stretched yourself on the blanket
and arched your back to stretch.
And I still stood, watching you.
 You then looked at me, and patted the spot beside you,
I smiled, took my jacket off, and beside you.
You put your arm behind my head
and played with my hair, near my ear.
I on my side, and looked deep into your eyes
I leaned over, and softly kissed you on the lips
You smiled and inched to me
you put your leg on top of mine
and your dress slide down your knee
past your thigh.
I smiled broadly, and you giggled
you took your finger, and ran circles on my chest
And had that devilish look on your face
You then sat on me, my hands on your hips.
'I..uhh..uhm...I' I stammered
  'Baby?' you asked.
    'Yea?' I said
      'Shut up' You said and kissed me again
with your ruby lips.
Then you guided my hand to take off your dress strap
 one by one,
Till the top fell to your stomach
to reveal your soft round breasts.
I leaned forward, and kissed your neck
your collar bone, your chest
  and I bit your nipple,
you giggled in surprise.
Then you reached down and removed my shirt
then, while kissing me, you unbuckled my belt
and unzipped my pants
You reached down, till you felt my penis.
You rubbed it, and groped it.
letting it harden in your hands.
You pulled my pants down, past my knees
And licked the tip of my penis
and rubbed my balls.
You then stood, and let the dress fall to the sand.
Then you tried to sit back on me,
but I flipped you on your back
And I layed on you, kissing your neck again
letting my hands roam.
Till I reached your waiting pussy
I rubbed your clit, and bit your nipple again.
I then put a finger in,
  first one
    then two.
I felt you getting wetter by the second
your head moving side to side, and the moans
 that you , told me you were enjoying this.
Then you grabbed my hand and pleaded for
me to put it in.
So I took my fingers out, the I replaced
them with my hard cock.
First the head, then the rest
Slowly at first, then harder and a little faster.
My body rubbing against yours,
your legs against mine.
Your hands grasping my back, your head on my shoulder.
I started going faster, and harder.
Minutes of steaming pleasure rolled by.
Sweat pouring off our bodies
and I knew that I was going to cum soon,
so I started to slow down, and pull out.
But you grabbed my penis, and put it back in.
'No baby' You said, 'Cum in me'
My answer was a look of surprise
 So I pushed, harder and deeper.
I went faster and faster, till I came in you.
You moaned so loudly in my ear.
I slowed down, feeling the wetness.
Our loud breaths and the ocean waves
were all we could hear, till I said:
'Babe?'
 'Yea?'
  'I love you' I whispered.
    'I Love you too' You said and kissed me.


Then I woke, to the sounds of the freeway
 near my house.
I was about to get up, but I felt and arm around my waist.
I turned around and saw your
 beautiful face, asleep.
Then I kissed your forehead, and
 I went to sleep, with a smile on my face.

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Written April 3rd, 2006

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 12

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    WOw... very sensual & erotic & hot!!
    Every line just makes your heart pulse
    faster and you can't stop reading to find
    out what happens next.

    Amazing piece..

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck

  • voluptoussheila
    May 14, 2007
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    wow..erotic to the hilt...beautiful and yet steamy...truely well written..


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    March 11, 2007

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    Steaminess....

    Wow...this piece made me go crazy...I couldn't stop reading!!!!

    An extremely well-written piece...


  • Pyper Rain gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    Nicely done.

    A little long, however good loving usually is. I like that this is more sensual and romantic than erotic. Great job!!


  • XxShatteredHeartxX
    May 25, 2006
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    wow, awesome story. its decent but it still kept me wanting to read more. awesomeness. thanx for entering, good luck.

    Best wishes,
    Becca


  • BloodyxNightengale
    May 24, 2006
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    wow.. haha... awesome story??
    haha...now I know I never want to know what goes on inside a guy's head..*stifles a laugh*
    yeah..anyway...
    Good luck in the contest and best wishes,
    Lisi


  • Tatianna Valcor
    April 24, 2006
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    nice job and good luck in my contest


  • secret love child-
    April 4, 2006
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    yup. this is a steamy one... =]

    me likey... yup it definetly sounds like that one dream... giggles giggle... heheh love you baby


  • April 4, 2006
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    Very sensual. I love the part how you wake up and it is a dream. It was a little disappointing. But, you retrieved the poem nicely by having your lover lying by your side. Great write. Keep writing and sharing. Peace be with you.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    April 4, 2006
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    this is a nice and touching write here a bit long for my normal taste but you managed to keep my attention in it well done
    love and light
    blaze


  • Silent Lie
    April 3, 2006
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    haha dude, i know i said i wouldnt read it, but w/e. i read the first part, up to where shit goes down. now here's your applause

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