I have a new lover,
Just her voice makes me smile,
A little pet here and there,
Makes the eternal pain rest for just a while,
I feel like for once i can rest my guard,
And it terrifies me so.
She's a very dominant lover,
But that's just better still,
Because inside,
I'm really soft,
And..
I'm just a submissive still.
I feel like I can sleep when she pulls me in,
Like I'm in a trance and must obey,
Safe feeling returning,
Anxiety leaving,
If only just for a little while.
I just love her so....
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Written April 3rd, 2006
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Hmm, I'll keep my pessimistic comment to myself. But nice write.
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How romantic and peaceful. Like curling up by a fire with the one I adore most in this world. Touching.
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aww what a lovely piece
so sweet and and yes i must agree its remantic
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Awww
This piece is cute, romantic, sweet, and expresses your emotions for this girl. She must be very lucky to have a guy like you!
Rarely, people let their emotions out, unless they are poets. You have done this perfectly! Keep up the great work and keep writing! -
Love is love, Lil. I show mine in many ways. But sometimes I'm predictable.
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nice!
It's adorable! ^_^ Very cute, but somehow, I knew it was coming....
~Lilith -
this very nice, it has a good feel to it even if the flow is alittle off for me,eventhough.. it still has great emotions and that's what matters the most.
blessings-
Krystal
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love it
awe.. I can tell u r in love.. When i see u around her! Its so amazing! Lol..
Alexis
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