Even though we are lost in silence
I just want you to know
That every thought and emotion
That flows throughout me is of you
My heart beats a mile a minute
Every time your name comes online
I just can’t wait to receive your messages
And I am more than anxious to send you mine
The heartfelt messages that we send back and forth
How I cherish them and read them every day
If only I could reach in and pull you near
If only I could somehow find a way
I feel so hopeless, with all of the love I feel
It’s like saving up money for a rainy day
I know one day we’ll be together my love
And I will put into action every word that I say
I will pick you up and never let you down
Get lost in your eyes as we float away on a cloud
Whisper sweet thoughts of love and the like
And take you away from the here and now
Together we will fly away into another world
Where we will live so happily
Where I can hold you in my arms and never let you go
For the rest of eternity
I long for the day when I can hold you close
And show you much I really care
How much I want to spend the rest of my life with you
So promise me that you will always be there
Promise me that you will remain faithful
Like I have been with you
Promise me that you will never leave me
I would die without you
I love you and I miss you
I want you here with me
There is so much that I have to tell you
So much love that I have deep inside of me
Until the day that we finally meet
I will be lost in these thoughts and emotions of you
Until I can look you in your beautiful eyes and see you smile
I will continue to love and wait, ever so patiently for you
Author notes
For those of you in an online or long distance relationship. I hope that you enjoy this poem!
Written April 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Internet Connection by Cynthia Gaines.
1400 points, ended February 27, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I have been through the online love thing, and I truly loved reading this poem of yours. So much emotion comes from your words, I can honestly never get enough of them. Beautiful write!
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Beautifully warm and romantic...
Thank you for your wonderful entry in this Internet Connection contest. 
I enjoyed reading your tenderly and thoughtfully written love poem!! I thank you for sharing your musings with us!! I'm wishing the best to you in all you do. Take care, and thanks again. Peace & Hugs xx Cyn 
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Great piece!
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Lovely entry, thank you. This line particularly caught my eye: 'It’s like saving up money for a rainy day' as I think it's a very good simile. It is so very frustrating... Thank you again for your entry and good luck =]
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It is so romantic, the online thing...seems so beautiful...until reality sets in it seems that way to me as far as my experiences have went...LOL...but if you have had luck in it I am so happy for you! I think it still is romantic...you chat ect..cant exchange a real kiss until ya meet thing! But I think if people are sincere and honest then it is beautiful! I love your poem here! great job!
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Jeremy I hope if you are falling in love on the net...you are being careful. Maybe though you just wrote it for others. Either way I care and if I don't stop now will become more of your mother than your sister...LOL. Great write dear..Trina.
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This is a great poem, another that had me in tears. Wow, your a great writer. This is an awesom poem.
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love it
hey ur poem rox. i kno exacly how u feel ive felt the exact same way bout sum1 on da net! u shoul read my poem bout my online love its called "me and you" by the way im dark-emo -
Sweet write!! I've had some deeply moving online relationships in the past. I made some great friends I hope to always stay in touch with. I wrote a poem to a friend, titled "Where", for helping me heal a broken heart. I hope everything works out well for you and your special someone. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep on writing!!
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This reminds me of a couple on-line relationships I was in long, long ago. It really brings me back. Its hard, but hang in there. ^_^
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