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Wing's of a Shadow

walking down a hall
listening
to whispers
they come
they go
then they bring pain
broken daze
broken craze
choken Mc'Graze
who the fuck you think
you talkin to?
think im just a
playa from the neighborhood
hell naw
if i was a playa
id have some babes
but all i have is bloodstains
so back the fuck off
before i slit your throat
you think im just playin?
say it again
well then
what the fuck
time to die mutha fucka
good-bye
no one caRES
time to kill you all

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Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaking
Written April 3rd, 2006

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  • PoetryBabe18
    May 4, 2006
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    wow..this is a little morbid..lol..but it has a nice structure and flow....Rayne


  • Darkside11
    April 5, 2006
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    O.K......a little disturbing, but it sounds like you...so good write...