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Today I Died

Today I cried
Tears fell like rain
For what I couldn't hide
So much sorrow and pain
The multiple times you've lied
Perhaps it was just your game
It was just my foolish pride
You didn't feel the same
So I say my goodbye
Fast I fade away
Today I died

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Written April 3rd, 2006

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  • mindi38
    April 5, 2006
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    i love the way the way this poem has been set out, it caught my eye, loved the words short and sweet, great writing

  • Poetic Babe07
    April 3, 2006
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    This poem is great! I like the format. I like the way it makes almost like a teardrop. It's really good and I know how you feel. This is probably something everyone can relate to. Great job! Keep up the good work!
    Love,
    Caitlin

  • His Pixie
    April 3, 2006
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    good beat good line set up i like it keep up the good work...

  • Batman
    April 3, 2006
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    wow..you know what was interseing about this poem, and i don't know if you ment it...but the poem itself kind of looks like a tear drop..very interseting..this seems full of passion...i really enjoyed it. I usally skip over the short poems like this...but i'm glad i took the time to read this..you are a very great poet..please keep the great work up!
    ~Jen~

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    April 3, 2006
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    Sheesh, now that is good. I was just clicking the submit to post it, and there was a comment already.

    Thanks for the comments, most appreciated

    Autumn

  • Dygurl
    April 3, 2006
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    wow this is an awsokme write. brilliantly structured. you have alot of talent. AWSOME!
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