Surround Me With Love...
Wrap me in your warm embrace.
Let me feel your sweet caress...
Kiss my lips, my neck, my face.
Whisper words I long to hear...
Say we'll never part.
Touch me with your tenderness...
Trust me with your heart.
Author notes
Written February 18th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Your best prewrite by glazecovered.
300 points, ended February 23, 2004, 274 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I like it. Thanks
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Thank you, Tim!
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Lovely!
awe, this one kinda comes out there and says hey, come on, love me, I'm that cute, heehee!
I love the style, helps this powerful message of your sweet soul come across crystal clear, I enjoy this, nice work Maureen!!! 
Much Love..
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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Many thanks to everyone who judged this contest and everyone who commented on my poem!!!
I can't begin to tell you how much this means to me.
Deo Gratias!
<3 Maureen
Edited on Feb 26, 10:18 p.m. because ''. -
simple, yet incredibly beautiful congrats on the silver!!!!!
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Congratulations! You deserve it.
Queen
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Beautiful piece sweetie and the picture and background adds that extra essence...Gorgeous words~ Congratulations on your win~Well deserved~Loved this one~Keep on writing and inspiring that love sweetie~Big hugs and much love~Desire
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One of yours that I missed my friend,so much passion which does not need a lot of words to express.It is wonderful to have someone in your life that can trust you with their heart,just as you trust them.magnificent Maureen.Love you dear friend~Joan
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“Surround Me With Love..”
“Wrap me in your warm embrace.”
Definitely something we all dream of experiencing.
“Let me feel your sweet cares...”
“Kiss my lips, my neck, my face.”
Ah the emotions these words elicit with in a person.
“Whisper words I long to hear...”
“Say we’ll never part.”
This is so true, the need to feel that we are wanted and that we will always have something that we hold dear to our heats and at the same time it helps us to feel that we are special; which is so correct for each and every one of us.
“Touch me with your tenderness...”
“Trust me with your heart.”
These last two lines I feel are the hardest for any one person to do, yet if we make the correct decision can be the greatest gift any one can give.
Your poem is full of the ins and outs of a beautiful and exquisitely precious relationship between two people. Expertly rendered and very in-depth.
Alimae -
lovely maureen
from start to finish
you had my total attention
almost makes me wish i still had a man in my life...almost (grin)
best of luck in this contest!
~liz -
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you loved my favorite poem!
Maureen
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Great job I absoulutly love this poem like so much. OMG you have a great poem here and this picture to go with it is so breathtaking. I love how you did this piece. You have a good grasp on this and the emotion is astounding. I have deep feelings toward this poem good job for taking your audience over like you did. Keep up the good work and good luck.
Shine brighter,
Baaby Star -
Thank you so much, Anastasia! I loved your comment and your applause! That was so nice of you! You made my day!
<3 Maureen
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Though short this is very emotional and full of passion and love. It is simply astounding to have sooo much feeling and emotion is such a short poem. I applaud your skill and bow down to the master of beautiful poetry. Awesome write. Thank you for entering and good luck.
~Anastasia -
wow maureen, very sensual poem. that feeling of closeness is very well described in this, very beautiful poem. it said so much in so little words, and reminds me of a few of my poems (but mine are really corny
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kayla* -
Wow Rubee! I LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM!!! Thank you very much!!!
<3 Maureen
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ohhh WOW Maureen!!! this is an absolutely awesome write..I absolutely LOVE it LOVE it LOVE it!!!!
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Thank you, Sis! Love you too!
Thank you, Mike! Really appreciate your nice comment!
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Poem and picture great, just proves that there can be great beauty in the human form and the songs about it and it doesn't have to be base, this sure isn't.
Mike -
don\'t touch it~
What beauty surrounds this poem sis
Love it
Love you too
Susan~~~~
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You did comment before, Joe, and a wonderful comment it was! Thank YOU again for then and for now!
Sincerely,
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mmm beautiful, I dunno why but I was sure I have read this one, and I was pretty sure I commented too, ahh well, but the poem was so fitting with that beautiful piece of artwork you posted above it, you made the emotions come to life in the picture anywhos, beautiful write Maureen, thank you thank thank you ......
sincerely,
joe -
Thank you so much, Angela! I'm overwhelmed!!! Your wonderful comment has warmed my heart tonight.
Peace and Love,
<3 Maureen -
completely wonderful
:sigh: So overwhelming, Maureen! I have tears in my eyes and goosebumps down my arms. The simple beauty here is astounding. I've wanted to say just that for so long but te words never come out right.
~Angela -
Your beautiful, poetic comment touched me, Artis! Thank you very much!
(((Hugs)))
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an island immersed in the wash and tide of love from his heartland
you are surrounded and sometimes overwhelmed by the ever flowing
waves of love that bathe your soul.....it is a tropical place fuill of heat and basking in the glow of afternoons filled with delight..go there often in theses troubled times and rest and draw strength from each other and exude love that might just touch others who happen by your lives....great poem......enjoyed it as always...Artis -
Thank you, seawnds! Henry David Thoreau said, "Simplify! Simplify!" Henry and I were both born on July 12th. I like that fact!
Peace and Love,
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I love this, Maureen. There is simplicity to the lines and rhyme that adds to the beauty of the thought. Well done.
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Thank you very much, Damon! I am thankful that I have someone who trusts me and I would never betray that trust. I am also thankful that I have someone that I can trust with my heart!
Peace and Love,
Maureen
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A beautifully written poem that you have here. I truly enjoyed it, and if someone does ever trust you or anyone with their heart we all better cherish that trust and never break the trust or the heart. Everyone should be thankful that they have someone that does trust them and loves them enough to trust them with their most prized posssesion--their heart.
Damon D. Brewer -
Thank you, Eddy!
It's nice to know you read it twice!
Love and Hugs,
<3 Maureen -
Short but sweet as sugar
The words of love in rhyme
Maybe I should go on back
and read it one more time...
Hugs and love...Eddy -
To Yvonne, Shelly, Tamara88, Poetic Escape, Trinoa,
Yusefeligirl, Danna Hobart, Omen, Joe, Chris and Anna
Thank you for all the wonderful comments on this poem. I really appreciate it!
Maureen
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This is just beautiful.I love the picture too. Well done.
Anna -
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful! What a lovely poem, background and picture to match up - words expressed are tender, thoughtful and poignant and the picture is sizzling ... ! the background reminds me that spring is right 'round the corner now .... Mmmmm!
WBL & L, chris -
well I dunno if I accidently clicked on this or not, but if it cost a point it is most assuredly worth a comment, this was a beautifully loving write in an old simple tradition of roses are red.... but way beyond that worn out limerick, this was simply beautiful and flowing,and the picture and background were awesome with it, hmmm, just loved it, somebody is so very lucky to be receiving loving words like this, thank you for promoting whomever, and thank you so much for writing this maureen, ,
Most sincerely,
joe -
Delightful
Short and sweet. I love it. Amazing.
So very exquisite (sp?)
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Let me feel your sweet caress...
Kiss my lips, my neck, my face...this is so sweet. It gives me a warm feeling.
Touch me with your tenderness...
Trust me with your heart.... trust is so important, and when you have been hurt, it is so hard to do. I know that it took me years to completely trust my husband with my heart... this is a very sweet write that eased my heavy heart. Thank you.
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Brilliant
Wow, this is gorgeous.
I love the drawing and the poem fits so well.
You captured the mood here, sensual and sexy, a real loving embrace.
The title is just perfect.
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A very sensual poem. Just reading it made me feel warm and long for the safety that a lovers embrace often holds. I particuarily like the begining since it feels so careing.
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A sensual write you have Maureen. Sometimes all we need is a warm embrace to make us feel secure. Very well written
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a true whisp of love and lust all wrapped together
in pleasure
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a truly lovely write here, Maureen!!
you sure did do an excellent job---so short, yet so sweet..
A Beautiful image as well . Thanx so much for sharing!!! visit me soon!! i have a new haiku up!!!!
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Just perfect. You had me from the beginning to the end.
Yvonne
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