I walked through a field of roses,
and each one i pick,
i pick for you.
This poem expresses my love for you,
and i look back and pray for us two,
that our love will forever grow,
like that rose field where we used to go.
Many years have passed,
but the memories are here to last,
Since we last visited that enchanted place,
where i first saw your face.
Now that place is no more,
replaced by a super-store.
But were still together,
now until forever.
Author notes
well i'm not in love but my mate asked me to write it for him so he could read it to his wife-to-be..
Written April 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Act Apalled, And Listen To The Past by pillowjoe.
600 points, ended January 3, 2008, 12 entries
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This is a very beautiful poem. Thanks for entering it into my humble contest. Good Luck at judging
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Wow this sia good poem though its not about you but its still great that i can say but my loves poems most are sad some are lyrics maybe 3 or 4 and some are happy or just wondering on love but this poem its so perfect a flashback the thought of love growing and the fact of the first time of seein your lovers face and a place that you guys met such an enchanting poem i loved reading it
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Aww. it's great. yay you blackpool boy.. serious, go on the MAX
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thanks, i'm new to the site, so i might be posting alot more on over the next week.
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I like this poem. The poem is rhymin', it goes smoothly from the start to the end. The first three lines already hooked me. I wanted to read more.
---Laramie
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