See the cracks through my skin?
Like patchwork on a quilt
That is where he took me apart
And then he helped to rebuild
But the cracks remain like scars
For the next time he desides to hurt
To take me apart piece by piece
And treat me asthough I where dirt
The green in my eyes is the envy
I have for you and your life
Where your lover does not wish death upon you
And is not the main reason you slice
The green represents the monster I have become
Now I am under his control
I cannot fell myself anymore
My heart feels as black as the coal
My soul is burning in hell tonight
As he penetrates my defences again
As he makes sweet sweet love to me
And then slaps back in the pain
The black hole in my eyes will never fade
For I will never recover from him
I will carry on living
Even when my heart has stopped beating
But I will never forget the pain he gave
As though it where the best gift
But now the pain has locked my soul away
And it now lays deep in the mist
Hiding from my master and me
From the pain that resides in my eyes
Because he is the love of my life
The pain inside me
Author notes
yeah ok a lil confusing but hope u like xxxlilxxx
Written April 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
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Awww this is very nice... it is a tad confusing in places but it really does help us to understand you and how you feel about a partner, or the person you are writing in the persona of, anyway.
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this wasnt written from experiance it was jus something that fell into my head but thanks anyway xxx
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WOW amazing poem this is one of the best poems i have ever read it rli gives ppl a good picture of the situation and the feelings u have towards urself as well as him bnut still well done amazing poem
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