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The song of a submissive

Shackle me,
bound me,
tie me up with great care.
Spank me,
maul me...
whisper slave in my ear.
the promising story
of the taboo,
a great relationship.
Master as you walk with such confidence,
such ease...
i hold my breath,
on my knees in submission,
wondering,
knowing that You chose me!
as Your calloused hand,
comes down on my behind,
and You growl with unpleasentness...
my eyes dance, i get excited.
Master please,
Mistress harder...
Master may i!?
Mistress love me.
slave, No
slave, who owns you,
slave, you're mine...
slave you don't exist.
Your world, dear Master,
is mine.
i worship you,
i worship the ground You walk on.
Your voice sends shivers down my spine.
dear Master oh Master,
i love You.

Author notes

being a slave is uber fun; a poem about my (ex) Mistress and (current) Master
Written April 3rd, 2006

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  • Friday gold member
    February 17
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    I found this to be one of those pieces that you fall into and forget all about figuring out what line works and what line doesn't, and just enjoy the rhythm of the poem.
    Beautiful work


  • Master Ktulu
    February 6

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    I thought I would drop by and read a few of your poems and see how you've been. Haven't seen much of you lately, hope everythings ok with you.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • The Dork Knight
    November 10, 2007

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    wow! can i sense a lil pent up frustration? i have something like that...poem wise. "waiting" check it out. i dig this one tho too. good job


  • Mykeee
    August 6, 2007
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    pretty hot ~ Submission to the desires of control is off the chain ~mikeeee

    • mozarts funeral gold member
      August 6, 2007
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      Thanks, submission is my greatest passion and my biggest mistake. But, I learn to deal. Thanks for reading.

  • rainyday woman silver member
    August 2, 2007

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    Whoooh

    What can I say about this? Well everybody loves a little slap and tickel, soft restraints and a feather or two. Nice, really nice.

    Cheryl


  • Iohagh
    July 7, 2006
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    Darling

    Do it girl and give in to your desrie to be restrained.

    Smoosh

    Janet
  • XXLOsTInTHeFAcESXx
    April 6, 2006
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    this one sounds liek it holds a little anger. But thats just you. I love this one just like all the others.

    Tabetha

  • queenmab
    April 4, 2006
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    hhhhhhhmmmmmm yes
    excellent


    how's life dearie?

  • Poetryintheblood
    April 4, 2006
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    Sensual and wonderfully penned write Josephine
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