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Time to get up,
  Time to let go...
 

 
Life takes its time,
   it deserts us,
it gives up on us,
   it makes us cry...

and then
     when you let go,
it hits you - 'wham'

for a long I pondered,
   maybe I am wrong...
maybe I am flawed,
   maybe I just lack it...
I never thought
  maybe It just wasn't me.

 - why didn't I think of that before?
  why should I be someone else?
why not me?
Am I not worth it?
Why - feel worthless?

Time to wake up... 
             Tic tic..........

Author notes

Lamest of all my poems... eheheehe..
Written April 3rd, 2006

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  • Pisces Pieces
    April 21, 2006
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    Well, for being the "lamest" I like it, I think it has many good points and makes one think! Inspirational


  • Imokon
    April 3, 2006
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    Yo go girl!


  • transcendental baby gold member
    April 3, 2006
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    Sounds like a statement stength & self love and determination to me Don't get no better, in my opinion
    Edited on Apr 03, 3:02 because 'thought of something else to say, why else?'.