My angel, my dear, my sweet lover ear
Embrace my words, before I lose control
For I reach for your love, you disappear
Now I'm just a shell, and have not a soul
Could you let me in, for my heart's sincere
As I beg of you, to mend me back whole
How, when, did we end, for me it's unclear
Recently, or a long, long time ago
Now all my days are full of deep sorrow
Whispers shared once, are now far away
When you find my heart, will you let me know
As of now I can't even live today
I thought we were close, and closer we'd grow
But how I long for youthful yesterday
Repair my tender heart, and don't let go
And embrace my love for your heart always
Author notes
Just some poetic ponderings I jot, much love, Timothy xx
Written April 2nd, 2006
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I like this poem! My rabbit was called angel and i lost him a year ago!! I really like the discription though!!!! -
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This is awesome. A really nice write, I can really feel the emotion in the words. Nice job.
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love it
I'm grooving,loving,this poem truely moves me,I thank you very much.Nice to read.Give your creative juice a kiss from me -
beautiful poem and beautiful page.
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Lovely:)
Poeticweaver you never dissapoint. Beautiful poem! -
Wow...it's beautiful
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This is so cool....weeping may endure for the night but joys comes in the morning
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AWSOME!!
th@ is the shit right there I loved it!! that sit he stuff thats draws me closer to my inner poet! thanx for being one of my ppl! -
Sad,But-Right-On
A very sad,but unique-poem;just the way,I"ve felt B/4,sometimes,I feel this way,quite a bit! I really got inot it,though.Good-write.Shirley Ann Shaw-Raytown,mo.64133 -
hard to add any more as others have aready found the right words to say about ur write
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I am speechless. This is just too good!
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What a jot
It was much more, fluent, uncompromised, structurally sound and true to form. Well done
Sincerely, crjem1991 -
beautiful... really liked it. lovely rose image...lovely write...articulatly put
well done, keep writing
jess -
this totally describes how I feel right now...kudos..
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This is not an end and a statement of completed loss. It will not let go and leaves the impression of some ray of renewal. I don't know if that was meant to be, but that is how I see it. The darkness of the break is almost at the final page...but not quite yet. Oh the heart crying for hope even when all is apperently lost.
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Very Good
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This is so sadly sweet, but...somehow it doesn't sound so very whiny as other heart-broken poems. It sounds poetic and beautiful and I really like it!! You did a good job, the flow is near perfect. Keep it up!!
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excellent
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great works
this is a work of tragedy and sorrow, but i believe you wrote this with a pure heart and of personal experience. something so great could not have been written from stories, or thought alone. i am sorry if you have been hurt, but a broken heart heals eventually. we may not see the end in sight, but it is there. terrible things in our past make great themes to write about. keep writing. -
No denying that the protagonist is REALLY hurt. (I won't assume it's you, because it's not listed under 'personal') The emotional content is like hydrochloric acid on my heart. But...
some of the phrasing seems kind of, well...
You know what, I don't wanna go too negative here. If you (the author) want to know the finish to that sentence, just IM me. (may take me a while to respond)
Truth is, this is a really good effort. And you DID touch me emotionally with it.
Write On!
jIM -
very pretty and contains emotion i think its great
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i often think to bring back my youth would i do anything different. maybe maybe not most things in the past are driven from missery and i think with that i am content. maybe i would write or not or be a dancer or not. or just be the confesser that i grew to be. do i have direction know i doubt it but by helping others i guess i shall just be... keep writeing
love the papa -
i loved every part of this..
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Great poem, from the heart, full of images of lost love and forgotten youth, great write -
Nicely done. It was packed with emotion, and had flawless delivery of your expression. The last two lines of the second stanza were my favorite. You lead up to what you want to say very well, though I can tell what had more emphasis and impact from that which was leading to it. Keep writing the good write.
Matt -
Vrey Excellent
How do you do it really, every time, i read your poetry, they just leave me trasfixed, they are so true, and full of emotions and, You are truely a poeticweaver, you know how to weave your poems veryb well, full of imagery and description that are clear and visible shouting out right in our face. This was a true beauty, it conjures so much about human emotions, single, married and even, family love. They are gentle, but so much energy, bloody yet beautiful. It touches our heart, Keep writting. God bless. -
Could be about lost youth as well as lost love - one day we look at ourselves in the mirror and wonder where the years have flown? Sentiments well expressed in this poem. ENjoyed the read.
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That was rather soothing and I enjoyed it a lot. This really describes a broken heart in the complete sense. Describes how I felt for a very long time before things turned around for me.
Very well done and can't wait to read more.
~Willie~ -
i love this poem. it is so cute. i would be lost without my loved one. you are so talented and your work is amazing. this was a pleasure for me to read. i truely enjoyed it. great job
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I'm sure your poetry is fine, it's all a matter of taste, thanks for your kind words, much love, Timothy
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i really like that!its good better than i could do...
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this is wonderful i really enjoyed it! it is an amazing piece of poetry and it was a pleasure to read. u really show your emotions and saddness through your poem it is amazing work keep it up and please for everyones sake never stop penning
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Thanks sweet angeleyes, much love, always, Timothy
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This was a really sweet and sad piece. I feel the desperation of the speaker, the uncertainty og how things got the way they are,a nd the confusion for not knowing exactly what to balme. Great write.
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Beautifully Penned!
Timothy, you capture every emotion all our hearts feel eloquently
Ah, how many times have I felt this way, seems an eternity.
Mega Force Powerful the line, “Could you let me in,”
I know in my heart when you’re this close to someone
You love them forever so never doubt your love.
Precious, Captivating Enchanting, what else can be said to your beloved
Then your heartfelt last line. Beautifully Penned on wings Divine~
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You are quite the poeticweaver . . . a weaver of beauty and grace! Wonderful write, m'dear! Keep penning . . . and pretti please . . . keep right on sharing!
Maggie -
A truly beautiful write with such sincerity...ahh you capture my emotions so well! this is how i feel at the moment in regards to people in my life...love love love..
The final line blew me away! well done Poeticweaver
Fern
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this is truly beautiful it filled a vacant spot in my empty heart keep writeing
love the papa -
So sad; so longing for the past.
Timothy you continue to write of sadness.
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Brilliant!.. You are a genious!.. This was awesome, you are so talented.. I love reading your works!.. Awesome job with this and keep up the great work!.. I hope to read more soon!
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Lovely and romantic read
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Thanks Sandy, you're so sweet! Love ya, Timothy
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I apologize for not leaving a decent comment but my computer screen is so dark that I cannot see the words on this background. I am sorry.
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you have the best poem i have ever read keep it up
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Sweet brother, your awesomely beautiful heart just shines forth within every line of this piece! So beautifully poignant and so very very well done! I love it! I wish for you only the best of the best forever and always! With much love, Sandy
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Wow.Wow.Wow. This is so good.
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Amazing!
You've put your heart and soul in this one, as you always do, and yet another lovely poem comes flowing through as only yours do. Love ya Dad, keep that pen to paper! 
lil Tim
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COOOL! This isnt one of those cheesy love poems that is like "Roses are red," all that crap. But this a really good poem. GREAT JOB!!!!
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You sure have a way with expressing your heart,
thanks for sharing you!
-me Rose* -
Another beautiful poem you have written here. Like all of you poems, it seems that you are so sincere. Beautiful and amazing write that will be cherished.
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This is a great poem it's so nice to read nice things
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WOW this is ... flawless. great job!
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this poem seems very heartfelt and sincere, I can feel the anquish and the passion. Great job, very enjoyable read.
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This is a very touching poem, without the psychotic "i'll kill you for what you've done to me," twist that poets seem to favor. It has a soft melodious fill to it that makes you weep and not feel at all afraid of this person. Any way, a great poem and i'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Blessed be.
Hugs and Kisses,
Tiphanie -
oh my, oh my. what an outstanding write, i really loved this poem. you have done such a great job on this poem. a very powerful but touching write. i loved this.
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Lean your head this way
And I will carry your pain
Till the day I meet my grave
I will love you always
Through your pain and mine
We will walk side by side
For your heart is one of a kind
And my love will never die
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Thanks for sharing your wonderful heart and beautiful love with us. This poem really touched me, I love it.
Much Love Always,
Tammy
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lovingly painful
Well Bro you have done it again, I really enjoyed your words. Amazing how many different ways you write, and all over the charts.
Way to go.
Love your brother
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This is an awesome write. Even in its pain.. and I wish that this kind of pain did not exist.. Just a touching, powerful piece. Debby
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You always pen so good!
Thanks for sharing, your friend, Introvert2006~
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WOW!!!!! this is so bery well written. i am with stardust on this. there is so much that can be said by those who love you but here is not the place. you are truly an awesome writer and i applaud that but not the pain behind these words. viyanna r langager
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WOW!
EXCELLENT PONDERINGS~
You sure do have the gift to weave these piece so effortlessly from your heart woven of pure, tender gold.
Thanks for sharing you, I love your writes!
-Me
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remarkable xxxxxxx
My sweet loving friend i am not sure where to begin as to how my heart feels between the tears of your words from your poetic soul. (actually some of what I want to say would have to be written on IM or email) {{{{{HUGS FOREVER}}}}}
I have said and felt these words many a day!!
Could you let me in, for my heart's sincere
I will always be here to talk -- you know where to find me!!
A heartfelt and caring write!! xxxxxxxxx
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