.point.breathe.
.art is within us all.
.my hand is on the pulse,
.I feel the rhtyhm
.and it gives me life
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Written April 2nd, 2006
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well not completely anatomical but i was relating it via imagery that way. it seemed to flow better. there are of course other ways and other aspects
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Interesting!You see life only from the anatomical point of view!But i do belive that Jane Austen and Einstein are still alive (in a different form but not to be ignored )...Short but makes you wonder what hides behind the lines!
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beautiful
Very cute. Simple and to the point. I'm loving the graphics on the page. Very sah-weet!.
I love the fact that such few words can mean so much.
Beautiful write.
Eager to read more.
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arw very bewtiful..
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thanks so much! i appreciate it
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I don't even know how good I think this is,
but I'm in love with it.
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go kryspin, it's your birthday, we gonna party like it's your birthday, drink (insert favorite drink here) like's it a your birthday and you know we don't give a fuck cause it's your birthday, lol, this is a good poem like the imgae you got up there, keep it flowing
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Nice
Great poem. Simple and direct. I love the graphics on this one. James
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