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Fading Invisibility

Fading Invisibility

It's been a while, since
Since, I've felt like this,
alone, scared, confused.
I feel as though
I have, lost myself,during the growing process, the transformation from child to woman.
I look around at friends past,
and know that,
they really weren't to begin with.
Been used and tossed,
Only to be picked up when wanted not needed.
Pieces of me, have broken,
and scattered into space.
Some i can't find,
Others can't be replaced.
Feel sometimes my mind is lost,
Or is I, who is losing  my mind,
can't focus, can't breathe,
drowning in the sea, called "Madness of Trouble"
slowly fading away
having yet to be noticed...

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Written April 2nd, 2006

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  • LaLaLie
    April 13, 2007
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    thanks for entering and good luck.