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Phantasm

Unknown messages
Rushing through my head
Sending vibes
Telling me
I want to
I have to
I need to
Touch you
Kiss you
Rape you
Murder you
To set me free
To feel alive
Shall I
Shall I not
Geting weaker
Getting stronger
Confused
Misguided
Hands restrained
Body taken over me
I see you
I hear you
Drawing close
Move away
I bet you
Please forgive me
If I lose control
Your life gone
In one flash
Harmed by me
My very own hands
Unknown messages
Slowly fading
Waking up
Sweat drips
Sweat drops
All a nightmare
I thought...

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Dot dot dot =]
Written April 2nd, 2006

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  • petrichor
    April 9, 2006
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    Wow I like how all the sentances were short and straight to the point, very effective. This was just very dramtic and beautiful, I loved it! ♥