Druid Princess chant your charm,
worship nature ,keep from harm.
Crops and creatures great and small,
pray for wisdom through it all.
Summer Solstice,autumn rains,
Lunar eclipse joined refrain.
Sacrifice of blood and grain,
to higher power once again.
Dance within circles of eternity,
for good health of you and me.
Natural healing is underway,
chant my lady,dance and pray.
Farm and forest depend on you,
I'll join entranced and chant here too.
~~~Suseann~~~
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This won gold in Amunet's contest.
Written April 1st, 2006
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Excellent work! Gives me a view of your beliefs that was much appreciated. Flow, rhythm, rhyme - just a terrific poem! -
Excellent poem suseann, it had great rhyming, great flow, an overall greatness to it, wonderful! Like in some kind of fantasy, I loved it!
best wishes as alwats
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Brilliance True Gold in Heart & Soul!
Oh Suseann,
Your lyrical poem is stunning and charming!
I humbly agree with everything our beloved RJ hath said.
You’ve taken me back dancing in time
to the days of the Druids when they would
use the magic powers of the moon and see in tune.
A beautifully penned song. All the best Sharon~
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I understand why this poem won gold. It has has lovely imagery and for the most part it paces like an incantation. I think that what most sets poetry apart from any other form of writiing is that the form (texture, meter and tone) enhance the missive. And here I can see where you really listened to the words and felt the message and combined message and form to create something better than either. Very well done!
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Nicely done congratulations on winning gold
my friend its well deserved. Love and hugs, me
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Thank you Gypsy! I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chant.And there were many in here who wrote beautiful pieces too.Congrates to all the winning writers who's talents shine in this contest!LOL~~Suseann
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"Summer Solstice, autumn rains,
Lunar eclipse joined refrain.
Sacrifice of blood and grain,
to higher power once again."
Glorious penning, suse...Congratulations on winning the gold, my Friend...You certainly entranced Gypsy with your wonderful writing, Lady...I'm so happy for ya, Sweetie...a well~deserved win!!! Yea, suse!!! Wanda
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Oh Bravo! This is a magnificent poem! The tempo is so upbeat, you can feel the mantra raising your energy and spirit higher and higher, peaking at the top of empowerment and serenity. This touches me deeply for it is these things that are my life. Phenominal write! One of my all time faves I've ever read. Blessings, Gypsy
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