I can see those tears are fake
And that you don't really care
Why did it turn out to be misery and hate?
Why is life so unfair?
I wish you would stop pretending
And for once in your life, tell the truth
When will this story reach it's ending?
Because I'm so sick of you
I have no-one to turn to, no-where to hide
I'm trapped, no matter how loud I shout
Surrounded by webs of all your lies
I don't think I'll ever find a way out
Forcing me to be someone I'm not
Letting me fade away into darkness
I hate you, but you're all that I've got
All you manage to bring is anger and sadness
I used to think you were the one
My guardian angel, my savior
How could I have ever been so wrong?
And be blind to all this danger
I'm going to let go, I'm slipping away
Deceived by your lies and cheating
I would never had guessed there would ever come a day
That in you, I'd stop believing
Author notes
I know this poem is confusing but that's what I wantd to show you. I've been trying to write something about my pain for some time and there you go. It's kind of wierd but think of it as a puzzle. Pieces of different emotions and thoughts put together
Written April 1st, 2006
What did you think
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Very good. I like it. Best of luck
Sorry for the delay with my contest judging I mean GOSH! look at all of them. I'm trying to judge it now. Hope I can manage.
Sean
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Very good poem.It's very sad too and I can releate to it very much.Awesome job!
Keep Writing
Blessed Be
~MagicalMoon~
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this is nice.. the reader can feel your pain and anger. it seems very raw to me.. i like it
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loved it xoxox
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aw. thanx
L.aO. liked my poem! lol
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This is beautoful
You convey your confusion with passion and talent... snif! 
this is awesome... Deceived...
L.aO.
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Amazing I mean Amazin wonderful wonderful poem u stretched your emotions to the fullest way to go bravo awesome dis is a powerful poem wonderful poem loved it keep it coming your poems are amazing bravo holla Babygirl
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wow. again just wow. this was truly amazing again! You are becoming one of my favorite poets
Congrats on that..few get that title!
Love,
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I really love this poem it explains how you ar really feeling. i have some of the same questions,go you well done glad you found the words to explain yourself
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