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Lonely gato






Looking for
um prato de leite
he walks around

Sedento, querendo
to drink sweet milk
mas tudo o que acha
is a bowl of water

Pobre gatinho
lonely and thirsty

Solta um miado
sad and loud
mas ninguém ouve
his lament

Agora deitado
curled in his basket
ele adormece
at the sound of a soft purr










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Leander, now you can understand the half
Written March 31st, 2006

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  • Titus gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    This is very cute, fluffy like your dear self, and the language is most attractive, it's almost cute like as kitty here. 2006? you need to do some more classy compositions like this one!


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    well if I keep reading in Portuguese eventually I will understand some and learn to speak a bit.. very nice poem here...PK

  • good poem

    Very good. I should try to put my Spanish skills to the test and write another poem in Spanish. Anyway, good poem.
    ~Evan~

  • Canto-Brasileiro
    April 3, 2006
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    Thanks! Leander only understood the English part

  • grannyeri gold member
    April 2, 2006
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    That's great for Leander, but what about the rest of us only Englsh speaking writers? Congratulations on winning bronze in this contest.

  • lelike
    April 2, 2006
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    sweet

    Lindo poema. I’m preparing a small collection of poems to my granddaughter (today she is only 4) and you is great. Some of my sweetest childhood memories are relate do poems read by my grandmother. Very nice your bilingual poem. Congratulations.

  • ea silver member
    April 2, 2006
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    congrats... this is sweet. I will read this to my kids.

  • leander gold member
    April 1, 2006
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    lmao YAAAAAAAAAAAY
    I just managed to understand half of this Potuguese poem I don't know though why one half was so clear to me, and the other half not you have used coded language didn't you

    it's beeeaaauutiful I so want to have the kitty from Bob The Builder
  • Joao Camilo
    March 31, 2006
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    It is pretty.
    Good tatic to get portuguese for those people

  • MargaretG silver member
    March 31, 2006
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    This is sweet. Although I really understand only the English, I feel that the Portuguese meaning comes through somehow. Gatinho is kitten, prato de leite is a bowl of milk. Thank you for making this so easy for me to read.

  • Canto-Brasileiro
    March 31, 2006
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    Yes, it gives muitas idéias
    You just learned a word today, ah, but doesn't fit here lol

  • Yemassee silver member
    March 31, 2006
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    How cool, how creative how beautiful. I still need to translate the Port parts but I get the idea of it. I like this intermingling...give you any ideas?

    Cute kitty...but mine is goofier!

    I'd have done the same with my comment but umm, I don't know Port
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