Looking for
um prato de leite
he walks around
Sedento, querendo
to drink sweet milk
mas tudo o que acha
is a bowl of water
Pobre gatinho
lonely and thirsty
Solta um miado
sad and loud
mas ninguém ouve
his lament
Agora deitado
curled in his basket
ele adormece
at the sound of a soft purr
Author notes
Leander, now you can understand the half 
Written March 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- ``` by Yemassee.
389 points, ended April 2, 2006, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is very cute, fluffy like your dear self, and the language is most attractive, it's almost cute like as kitty here. 2006?
you need to do some more classy compositions like this one!


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well if I keep reading in Portuguese eventually I will understand some and learn to speak a bit.. very nice poem here...PK


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good poem
Very good.
I should try to put my Spanish skills to the test and write another poem in Spanish. Anyway, good poem.
~Evan~
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Thanks! Leander only understood the English part
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That's great for Leander, but what about the rest of us only Englsh speaking writers? Congratulations on winning bronze in this contest.
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sweet
Lindo poema. I’m preparing a small collection of poems to my granddaughter (today she is only 4) and you is great. Some of my sweetest childhood memories are relate do poems read by my grandmother. Very nice your bilingual poem. Congratulations. -
congrats... this is sweet. I will read this to my kids.
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lmao
YAAAAAAAAAAAY
I just managed to understand half of this Potuguese poem
I don't know though why one half was so clear to me, and the other half not
you have used coded language didn't you
it's beeeaaauutiful
I so want to have the kitty from Bob The Builder
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It is pretty.
Good tatic to get portuguese for those people
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This is sweet. Although I really understand only the English, I feel that the Portuguese meaning comes through somehow. Gatinho is kitten, prato de leite is a bowl of milk. Thank you for making this so easy for me to read.
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Yes, it gives muitas idéias
You just learned a word today, ah, but doesn't fit here lol -
How cool, how creative how beautiful. I still need to translate the Port parts but I get the idea of it. I like this intermingling...give you any ideas?
Cute kitty...but mine is goofier!
I'd have done the same with my comment but umm, I don't know Port
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