Darkness is all she sees
The room filled with silence,
The exception...
Her heavy breathing
Still bound to the bed posts
She lies in agony
From the tension
Slowly filling her
Softly, in the distance
She hears the sound
Footsteps...
Closer...
Closer...
Then nothing
Her shriek pierces the air
A cry of painful pleasure
As the leather
Connects with her skin
Her flesh turns crimson
Within mere seconds
Only one blow
It was all he needed
"My puppet of love,
The passion to my pleasure,
As I enter you deeply
My sword encased within you
Remember you are forever mine"
And he thrusts into her
A passion that
Is totally beyond any
Comprehensible compare
In her mind,
She knows it is his love
But the primal lust
As he forces himself
Into her waiting cove
Controls all thoughts
Her legs wrap round
His formed, muscular back
Drawing him closer
And to her advantage
She uses the restraints
Binding her arms
As leverage to control
Each and every thrust
She returns to him
And as they reach the brink
Of yet another climax
She looks deep in his eyes
Straight into his soul...
"I am yours forever
Do with me what you will
For I am a slave to your pleasure...
Master"
(more to come...)
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Written March 31st, 2006
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very exciting and nice write! i liked it a lot,
<33 amanda -
I have missed so much. I guess I wll have to go back to check the earlier submissions (pun?). Very wonderful and erotic write, Goddess. Fabulous work.
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I'll start with thank you for the comments.
I will add, that no matter how many people write about the same thing, each person's perspective is slightly different, or twisted if you will.
I will finish with, I post this series on three different sites, by demand of followers primarily. It had started as one long write that I split into two parts, and will more than likely now become a short story, or a novella of sorts.
I look at it this way, as long as people want more, I write more.
Once again, thank you
Autumn -
so um...that was hot...but yea seeing a theme with this whole kinky bit. everyone's doing the "i claim to be ur slave, wear and tear , use and abuse me, for i am urs oh great master..." it's hot...but how repetitive...i guess i shouldn't complain. i really like this one.
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another nice addition, keep up the great work.
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Nice
This is quite interesting..I never really understand these "master" poems when it comes to erotica...but that's just me. I do like the fact that you describe every action quite well..but with the type of poem it is, it makes it hard to figure out what people mean. Otherwise, I thought it was a pretty good write.
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