erotica~~
Techno - Enigma (Erotic Dreams) - Voices In The Dark
Album - Erotic Dreams 2004
3mp3.ru/eng/album/25604/African-Love-Erotic-Dreams
I've arrived to kiss the magic in your eyes
The narrow road to your soul is my sunrise
I'd long to be the instrument you're playing
For my body is your love for the making
Erotic arts of a poetic master
Shall they sculpt your beauty in alabaster
Ravishing my flesh with your deep lustfulness
Teasing me, pleasing me, my love I confess
Your touch so tantalizing, igniting me
Leaning forward with deep desire firmly
It's in your strong, loving arms my eyes reveal
Your fingers fixated, how sexy you feel
I'm stroking your skin as a red violin,
Your erotic wet tongue bathes my silken sin
Leaving me powerless, you fit like a glove
Sip rose coloured lips, of warm liquid love
I'm drenched in summer rain, screaming your name
Your width starts dripping, fuelling my inner flame
A night of ecstasy, fulfilling my core
Thrusting intensely, satisfying me more
As our love flows, over and over again
We weaken entwined, from beginning to end
I close bedroom eyes, mesmerized tender true
And I will never love, another like you
-poeticweaver
-angeleyes711
Author notes
Thanks for reading us two~ Divine Love and Tenderness to you~
Written March 31st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Collaborations Please???????? by Celticmoon.
400 points, ended April 14, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me Kink (Erotica) by Blue Eyed and Alive.
385 points, ended July 17, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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congrats with the gold win
writing of such is no thing I'm in
but there are worse ways to pass time
than this art of the senses sublime
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Dearly Beloved Chris,
Thank you for your comment.
Thank you for gracing us with your divine poetic flame.
~Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, ~Love Sharon~
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awesome write and congrats on the gold. love the hot write. keep penning together.
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Dear coffeeangel316, I am thankful and happy you inspired me to place erotica~~ in this contest. Thank you for all your loving comments and lifting us both up to the heavens once again, my new old friend. I am thrilled for both of us, its so easy to write with ~Timothy The Poeticweaver~, its as easy as 1, 2, 3,~~ Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally. ~Love Sharon~
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You guys did fantastic on this poem
Very well done
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Dear Huntress, Thank you very much.
~XXX Hugs, and Love, Timothy and Sharon~
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Thanks for taking the time to be always uplifting, and we tried, and we are pretty happy withnthe results!
I'm glad you enjoyed, much love, Timothy & Sharon~
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Being a contest for collaborations I knew without a doubt I would find you both teaming together once again for a most glorious piece of poetry. I am once again impressed by how well you both work together. It's as if it is 2 minds, 1 heart and 1 pen working to paint a masterpiece. A lovely lovely piece you both have penned here......BRAVO!
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perfection in every sence of the word
show me were i can get some of that!!!
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mmm soudns like some1 had fun . fantastic poem love
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Great Work
Oh wow, this is awesome you two
As always, I love what you do
Sending love you promise to never lose
Eachday your love is anew
Hold on to the love you share
In your hearts, always care
For you make one hell of a pair
No other love could ever compare
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I love you two very much. I am always happy to read you both. Much love alway
Tammy
Edited on Apr 06, 7:20 p.m. because ''.
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Unbelievable! You two are awesome. Stick together!
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so awesome!
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lovingly tastefully sexual
Excellent colab, truely a double tallented feast for the sentual soul. The way making love, and being in love should be !!!!! -
Smiles ..very good ..well written and nice flow .. I am glad you have someone who can ignite your soul ..not all of us have .. enjoy and return the love and life will be good always ..
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this sounds like a really good night! great poem I love it!!
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Love it, it is soooooooooo juicy and all. Simple and exotic and just delicious
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This is really good. Its so tender and full of love.
This is a truly beautifull poem.
It is actually one of the MOST beautiful poems I have ever read. You should write many more together.
0_XVampyX_0
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wowza..this is very well done. AWESOMENESS!!!
Lisi
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Well written and loving tender poem.Well done.Love and light,Yvette
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Wow
Beautiful...amazing...stunning....breathtaking...need I say more? This was most excellent, full of love and feeling....great stuff...I absolutely loved it and from the looks of things, many others did too. muchas amor, Amanda -
Woven with care...
Each part placed in precise measure to the deific embellishment of harmony, hum, strummed and thumbed – hitchhiking aside – the quiver in the liver is the best the guest will feel. Beautifully placed words under a gorgeous sunset. Much color and refracted light ~ EZB -
this was one of the most beautiful things that i have ever read on the subject
keep writeing
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magnificent piece of poetic art
what a very beautiful read, and i love the picture it ands to the whole affect, to make it even more erotic. You word play, is just like TNT, boom! a talent from two of you, thats so explosive. write on!.....ennovy -
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Great imagery! I like the way you used musical instruments.
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Damn Good
Very well done. A wonderful image of passion. It had much heart and soul. Good job and keep writeing. -
So sensual and wonderful. You have a great deal of imagery in here but it is far from graphic or vular. A beautiful poem about the passion in making love. Great work.
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I am just a simple guy so I will put it simply. This poem made me hot. very very well done. I need to go wake the wife. lol
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This is a well constructed poem. Nice imagery and flow. As this is a contest poem, I will leave nit picky criticism for the judges. Best of luck!
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This is a very powerful piece that indicates love of flesh and ogjectivity with a not so powerful but still present love of spirt soul and mind. quite the good piece of work, i can apreciate it for what it is. Excellant work
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excellent
Trully amazing!!!!!!!! Bravo!!!!!!! This write is magnificent, i love the image too. Love is as lovers do, keep the good write coming. -
expertly done
Oh my...where is my husband when I need him....first, I loved the pix, then, my favorite part"Im stroking your skin as a red violin, you erotic wet tongue bathes my silken sin" that part just gave me goose bumps! This was excellent, I found myself reading to a tune, if you will, it just had this flow to it. Anyway, loved, loved loved it! -
very beautifully done! magic happened in this piece. the ryhmes weren't forced and it flowed nicely! talent is oozing from this piece. thanks for a great read!
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Well what can I say.This is truly a poem written in class.Your choice of words here define a sex act but keeps it in the realm of nature and love.That is talent.Thanks for the read.Write on.Jim
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Very, very pretty and nice.
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Holy crap! That is just good writing! Really could feel the passion dripping from each line. Wow this totally blew me away. Nice job!
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So much beautie, So mush passion, So much power. Wow,
as they say sex sells and this would be a Dymond on a store shelf. good job. -
Brilliant.
You should do very well in this Contest. It was more like love than erotica. But I guess it takes a touch and a taste of both to may the emotion complete. -
No wonder this has recieved so many applauses. This is an excellent write. It really had a great flow. I could hear a reader sort of rapping this poem. Great write!!! I'm impressed.
Good luck in the contest!!!
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lovely
This is a totally awesome write. I love the way you wrote it and it is soooooooo sexy and sensual but not dirty! I love it. I hope to see you write more like this! Much props and MUCH applause!
Sip rose coloured lips, of warm liquid love
My fav. line.
LOVELY!
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Delicious
The rythym tricked me at first...and I didn't realize it was a collaboration til I got to the end of it. (I must've scrolled down too fast. Premature Scrolling...LOL) But once I did, I re-read it again and then had my Wife come upstairs to read it...and then...
Mmmm. someone hand me a napkin or washcloth please...and one for the Wendy. We BOTH liked this one...a lot. Well, uh, gotta go.
Write On!
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Very good
The musical imagery works well for me, seeing as how music can be a very intense experience. Great work.
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starts off like a hymn to passion. Evolves into a sensual dream. I was tantalized and delighted. I found myself enjoying the images like I enjoy exploring a lover and feeling gifted by someone understanding that the truly sensual and erotic if full of mystery and discovery. Thanks. Love, Tom B.
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beautiful
Wow that was amazing! Great discription. wish I could write like that -
great
Great poem, well written and with such a great image, what else can on say but great -
wow this is so beautiful, wow its amazing, i loved it soo much u are gifted with words honestly you are, and though i have no more appady things i will because its a great poem, awesome, absolutely beautiful and pleasig to readm its love, lol well amazig
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Outstanding
This is a very beautifully written poem that I really enjoyed reading. The picture is superb and so is the coloring. Very nicely done and keep up the great work. -
All I can say is: WHOA!!!
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful poem!
Great vocab, meta's, everything in there - just awesome work.
It also touches the reader really deep with its gentle "love making" and kisses and so on...
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this is perfectly brilliant,the feeling the love...gah i dnt even know what to say,great write
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very good
Beautifully and erotically titillating. Love and desire in your words of eros music. -
awesome piece
Sweet tender
Roses to you on this wonderful write
Teresa -
excellent
Awe,i really loved this,i'm lost for words to be honest,just keep up the excellent work -
Beautiful
Such a beautiful, sweet, and romantic poem. The picture, the background and the flow of this was just right. Great job on this you guys! -
WORTH THE GOLD
Hey you two..... How did you sneak in on me and my friend. You guys so explained my night of exrotic fulfillment on 1/26/06.the thing is when you do find someone like this, you won't find anyone else that is going to love the way this person has.
Yvonne
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I'm not a fan of love poems anymore (blame the wretched hopeless romantic turned emotional masochist in me), but your collaborations together always blow me away. How I wish to be able to find the one with whom I am compatible on every level, and who could awaken my senses and sear the core of my very soul. I respect anyone who can write erotica without being crass or too graphic, and I absolutely love how romance is entwined throughout this piece. Your slow, rhythmic beat adds sensuality to the poem, and not a single word is wasted here. Absolutely fabulous. I pray for many happy days for you both.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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SWEET & SENSUAL!
AND I WILL NEVER LOVE ANOTHER LIKE YOU!
A beautiful last line to a fine, sweet, and sensual piece! I enjoyed it - to say the least! The background, the picture, and the entire poem worked perfectly together!
Love & Peace!
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This is just so beautiful!erotic, sensual, sexy, romantic It is so truly wonderful to feel this kind of love. I loved your rhyme and rythm and how evrything flowed
The picture is awsome and the writing superb.
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WOW!!
This is so beautiful! Ill be honest I expected something very erotic and just sexual, but this is filled with so much love! and when things are sexual between two people because of love, thats when love is beautful! ♥
I loved the stanza:
I'm stroking your skin as a red violin,
Your erotic wet tongue bathes my silken sin
Leaving me powerless, you fit like a glove
Sip rose coloured lips, of warm liquid love
I loved your rhyme and rythm and how evrything flowed and especially loved your picture! Thanks for sharing!
'Licia
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Quite sensual, collaborations make it even more cutting edge - and the song was one of my all time favorites : )
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Now this has such power and is on a level above the average erotica,so that while I'm not usually a fan of erotic poetry.This one is truely inspired in it's soft petal dusting of powerful words makes it more than a joy to read.Loved it yous twos! Is a winner!~~~Suseann
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that was hot and beautiful! just those 2 words are all i can say
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oh my god
this is beautiful
i can't think of the words to describe it
amazing
bravo
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mmmmmmmmmm
very in tuned and sensual indeed!! The writing flowed so well together My Favourite stanza was:
As our love flows, over and over again
We weaken entwined, from beginning to end
I close bedroom eyes, mesmerized tender true
And I will never love, another like you
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very nice..."for my body is your love for the making", i loved this line
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erotic, sensual, sexy, romantic and every other word that fits into this group. beautiflly done.
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loved that...sensual and erotic arrousing the senses,mmmmmmmmmm
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WOW!
OOOOOOOMMMMMGGGG!
This is the most ah-mazing piece of erotica I have ever read. WOW!!!! I love all of it, and I didn't even read it all. Whoever you two are, keep up the collaboration...it's simply amazing what you can do together. -
That left me speechless, which is kinda hard to do! This was a beutiful poem, and I loved the picture to go with it! This was awsome, I could not have done a better job myself if I had tried. Good luck in the contest, I dont think you will need it, but I will say it anyway. Just awsome! Realy realy realy realy awsome!!
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Orgasmic!
Very nice! I like this a lot. It really shows your deep desire! It flows beautifully. Keep up the wonderful work. -
Encore!
wow beautiful and sensual was this poem...the rhyming was perfect and the flow, sensational. this is by far the best erotica+romantic poem I have EVER read...your metaphors are dazzlingand I know this is very worthy of applause so I will definately give you that, and I bow my head to you, for I have heard no one speak truer or as magnificently. -
WOW. THIS IS HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! U GO!!! my fav part was
:I'm drenched in summer rain, screaming your name
Your width starts dripping, fuelling my inner flame
A night of ecstasy, fulfilling my core
Thrusting intensely, satisfying me more
Keep up the good work
Love Always
Diamond
Ps my mom would kill me if she saw that!! haha
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oh wow very beautiful... this is just great and so so sensual. so sexy and well expressed. this was just amazing.Impressive write with a wonderful flow . heart warming and full of love and passion. love this poem.
outstanding job done here with emotions of love.
thanks for the read
and keep on pening
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This was very tastefully and finely done. I really liked the flow and diction. Very nice imagery and descriptive flow.
And sexy, almost forgot sexy...
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I thought this poem was powerful in an understated way. This poem has a very well-crafted feel to it, as though every word were carefully selected and weighed against the other possible words that could have been chosen, but weren't.
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WOW... This is very beautiful... It is so sensual and not raunchy... You two did a great job on this!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
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wow.... this is a very beautiful poem, and it was written very tastefully and lovingly. I was very pleased to read it! Good Job~
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SENSUAL AND SWEET!
AND I WILL NEVER LOVE, ANOTHER LIKE YOU!
A perfect ending (which is just the beginning) to a perfect night of love and bliss! This was a very sensual and sweet piece written with erotic kisses from your beautful heart and soul - full of fine lines, rhymes, rhythm, heat, and the power of love. I enjoyed this steamy piece - to say the least!
Love & Peace!
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WOW! This is so beautifully and very tastfully done! I love it! Keep the ink flowing you two together! You make wonderful poetry together!
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This is awesome! So sweet and loving. I really enjoyed this poem. You have a great talent. Keep writing and the best of luck to you in the contest!
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Suberb
This is just so beautiful! It is so truly wonderful to feel this kind of love. I wish you the best and Brightest Blessings!
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tastelful, sexy, awesome, wonderful, best description of the situation!!! absolutely love the style, the wording, the loving emotion!!!
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gotta love a wet tongue bathing silken sin!
very erotic rhymer you've woven together here. I wish you much luck in the contest.
~travis
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oh wow this is just great. one of the best poems that i have ever read. so sexy and done with such class. this was just amazing. the whole flow of it was wonderful. heart warming and full of love and passion. outstanding job.
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excelent
i love this poem it was very sexy but not in a slutty way which is hard to do some times.
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I LOVE THIS!!!!
My darling dear how beautiful it is to make sweet love to you, ooouuu, how we melt each-other, as we are on fire, and our hearts overflow with sensual, sexual healing in the pouring rain, say my name, say my name...lol...I love ya, and I so appreciate your time and all you do for me, and the way you do it! 
Much 
always 
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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Thanks for reading and your support, much love sis always!
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ooooh guys, this is AWESOME!!! Very very sensual and so very tastefully done! I very much enjoyed the reading of this, you two! Wow! Intensely passionate! The best of luck to you in the contest!
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