Fire at Union High School
Dead of summer
People's anger caught red-handed
Others happy as clowns
Broke a record of any bad thing to come
Blood on every locker
Blood on every wall
On every door
On every inch covered in blood
Pool of blood in one room
Devil stands in it
Dancing happily
No one sees it
No on knows what all happened
Say someone started the angry fire
Hairs on necks stand up
Sixth sense kicks in
No one knows what it is
By the time they understand
Too late
Everyone's dead
Even them,
In red hair
Evil
Still lives.
Author notes
Written March 31st, 2006
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Very dark and sinister, but beautiful at the same time. Strong and expressive.
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THIS WAS MORE OF MY TYPE BUT I FIND A LOT OF THINGS I DIDN'T..BUT THANK YOU FOR ENTERING
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Thank you, i am glade that you like the imagry and i wont let my mind go to waist, i plan on writing until my fingers fall off(lol)just a joke
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WOW! AWESOME POEM. I LIKE THE IMAGRY. ICAN PICTURE ALL THIS HAPPENING. YOU HAVE AN AMAZING MIND SO DON'T LET IT GO TO WASTE. KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITE AND NEVER STOP.
SCARLET SHADOW
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