Rebirth
in retrospect...
frissons of life giving
elements emerge, dawn breaks ...a
new day.
Author notes
Written March 31st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- What do you see #26 by leander.
300 points, ended April 10, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Sweet~
Sweet piece here,
like the way you express with this form,
great write, pen on.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Many thanks for your lovely comments
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ooh, a cinquain
I've never thought actually I'd find one of these inside this one that reminds me it has been quite a while since I wrote one 
very beautifully done!
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Not weird....inquisitive maybe
enquiring even ...lol many thanks for your comments, as always they are appreciated
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retrospectively......fissions.....tremors? of live giving birth to the new dawn? make me wonder.....if not the quivererousness shimmer to the same light.....as the dawning rays of new horizons.....how progressive this may seem...mixture of thoughts and visions of inspirations consumed...guess Im a little wierd....lol....lovely write....much to think about here....
Malabu -
Many thanks for your kind comments
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I liked this poem!good luck in the contest
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Yep, thats me....short and to the point Many thanks for your comments, they are very much appreciated
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Thank you my friend
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Ms Cutie, this is quite an emotional piece, reads beautifully; floating across the sea to greet me. (thank you)
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I do so love these weird pictures....makes me have to think and then try to build something....Thank you for your support, as always it is appreciated
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hmmmmm very nice, very short, gets to the point. Like it very much ^^ great job, good luck in the contest!
~BCL -
I'm here again.
This is a nice piece.I think it's the best you could have said about this strange picture.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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