God is great
Over Don't go over the limit
Do what he has spoken about
Is the way to go
Showed us life in this world
God knows the way of life
Refuse dont refuse his gift
Ear Listen with your ear to what he has to say
Are you following what he says
Taught He taught us how live and taught us how to be
Author notes
I wrote this because I believe in God. Yes I have lost a lot of my faith but I entered this contest to write something for it to show that I do believe in God and to write something new... Written March 31 2006
A contest entry
- Time For God #13 by Samplette.
300 points, ended April 13, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Just as I thought. This is deep! Yes, God knows all about us, and our lives. This is great! Keep on writing dear.
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very good
but acrostic's need to be to the left so that you can read nown the side centerd poems for this do not work keep doing well
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God is great!! This was a nice acrostic. It would have more impact aligned to the left, but that's opinion..Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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nice job! i especially liked this line "Ear Listen with your ear to what he has to say" that is such an awesome line! nice work
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Good poem about God. Would you like to comment on my latest poem too?
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I really liked your poem. Yes, I agree with you God is definitely, infinitely GREAT!!! God bless you and good luck in the contest.
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