Imagine
by your side
celestial being,
fluttering, translucent wings,
merry, playful and winking sprite.
Imagine me
gliding down the petal
like a crystal morning dew
absorbing the rays of beam
under your eyes lids
imagine me.
Imagine me,
your shivery pixie,
coming from the promise,
with a basket full of kisses
covered with colors of music,
wrapped with a sound of colors.
I will sprinkle with my magic dust
your curious youth, and I will sing.
After my elegant dance,
my silvery tip toes
will leave traces;
you will find
childhood
mystery
on your
palm.
Just let me in your dream...
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Written March 31st, 2006
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This was so beautiful!! What lovely imagery. I was enthralled. I loved every minute of it.
"Imagine me
gliding down the petal
like a crystal morning dew
absorbing the rays of beam
under your eyes lids
imagine me."
That part was absolute perfection!
Thank you so much for entering and good luck!!
xAx
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Thank you ceegeeess for your kind invitation, it's nice if my verses entered your dreams.
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very relaxing
sweet Sonja.you are welcome intomy dreams every day!"with a basket full of kisses
covered with colors of music,
wrapped with a sound of colors."
"I will sprinkle with my magic dust
your curious youth, and I will sing.""
Your beautiful words made me relax in fine thoughts. Thank you sweet Sonja! -
Peek in the basket my dear Abigail and you will always find something for you.
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fantastic so much meeryment and sunshine in each desirable word a great effort and i love the line
a basket full of kisses
so sweet
thankyou
lol abigailxxx -
Kevin, I am gled if you like my pixilicious attitude and verse full of imagination
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Thank you michele.
~Sonja~ -
beautiful write - good structure - best of luck in the contest
michele -
Very nice poem, well done and beautifully penned
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TRULY BEAUTIFUL
This is very beautiful and one that gives to all a sense of hope and love if they are willing to open their hearts and let you in.
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All pixies deserved all kind of credits. All magic and love. Pixies are not always so kind, but all depands of human beings...
~Sonja~ -
Thank you my dear StoneLion.
~Sonja~ -
Such a nice words from my dear pixie. Thank you my dear.
~Sonja~ -
As always, thank you for your comment Linda, but, it looks like that you still do not know strenght of your magic, your poetry and your presence in our lifes. Very pxielicious. You could be this little pixie too
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Well, my dear sunny day, Pixieland without your sun rays would be only a darker place. With your comment I'v got more magic force to share with all my grat pixies and elfs and all...
~Sonja~ -
Thank you blondone for nice comment and for being my permanent reader.
~Sonja~ -
wtchtpr...4.0
This is so magical. You piqued my imagination with all those visions. Your character in this poem is a credit to all the pixies, their kind and the folks who love them. -
This is beautiful, my Pixie friend. I love your final line. This just makes me sigh for how gorgeous it is. Best wishes.
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A very pixieliciously good read mum
Beautiful imageries and warm heartfelt thoughts, I enjoyed the read Love you millions and always. Laura 
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what a pretty poem..form and structure you have penned to share with us, nice flow and really tells a story of your
inner self thank you for sharing and good luck..
Linda -
Golden words from the heart!!!!!
Auntie Sonja, What a wonderful write you have done here. It is Pixielicious. Through your words I can see that little Pixie gliding down the petals of flowers dripping with the morning dew. Pixies filled with light and love sprinkle magic dust all around. Helping to make the world a brighter place, bring sunshine where there is rain. This poem is filled with all the hope that Pixies give to the world, it is filled with you. Best wishes in the contest. This has my vote for the gold I see in it. Lots of love, Joyce (Your sunny Pixie niece)
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sweet real sweet well written poetry here love this is just sa the words flow with ease I love to dream like this well done as always enjoyed reading your writes I applaud this one
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Thank you miss-apples, I am glad you like it.
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Thank you for your kindnes Tre Brown 3000 and for your time
this poem is a little different and without rhyme,
but your good wishes are always welcome.
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Very pretty and I liked the form as well. Poems about dreams and fairies are always fun.
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Thank you for being slways so nice,
and because you are the first
I will hug you - twice!
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wow...now that is a hell of a way bo have someone let you in there heart. Nothin but love to this thas all i can say. It was that good yadidimean! Great work and good luck in tha contest! This is great work
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wow..this is a wonderful piece my dear queen.
You're already in my dreams.
Love you,
I'm still the first one to comment on this piece.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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