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Almost There

Forget the smiles, revenge the pain
Loving you has been insane
Light the fire, set a blaze
Time to find a brand new craze
Bring a book, a fresh new page
Out of that claustrophobic cage
Take a breath, smell the air
Know now love is never fair
Now take a step, one by one
Lets start to have some fun
Toss the old, turn around
My life now set upon the ground
I stumble slowly, on my face
I'm not ready yet to erase

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I'm getting over something because I guess I have to.
Written March 31st, 2006

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  • kitkatkatie1
    March 31, 2006
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    omg this is absolutely amazing! i love it more than i love cake!! lol... great write i absolutely love it


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    Very Good

    Very good writing. Love is not always fair. This is a very descriptive poem. You write very well. I hope you get over whatever. Keep on writing.